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Come fly with me


Come fly with me
Photo Information
Copyright: Francesco Pascale (frappa76) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 201 W: 51 N: 137] (1346)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-03-28
Categories: Daily Life, Nature, Decisive Moment, Mood
Camera: Pentax Optio S 4
Exposure: f/4.8, 1/60 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-03-31 8:49
Viewed: 840
Points: 30
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hello!
This shot was taken from my window.
This bird was alone on the wire waiting to fly away while the black clouds were arriving.
It seems it was waiting for me to fly with him.
I wish I could fly!

in PP...
Crop, resize, B/W, contrast, light, shadows, sharpness, frame.

Regards, FRANCESCO

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  • laine Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 376 W: 37 N: 106] (877)
  • [2006-03-31 9:13]

nice idea, however, i think the photo is a bit too gloomy/grey. probably that's because of B&W choice..
anyhow, like the title of a photo (and song as well!) :)
Laine

Hi Francesco,

Great picture, the lost!
beautiful composition.
I like simplicity and good I like here!
Congratulations

Sérgio

Go on Francesco, go long with the bird!
I believe you can fly!!!!!!!
(love the space above)
Sabina

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  • Tintin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2198 W: 267 N: 345] (1982)
  • [2006-03-31 10:21]

Very nicely done, Francesco. I like this very simple composition with a lot of empty space at the top as I find that it adds a lot of mood to it. I personnally like the B&W and again it goes with the mood. Well done!

Bella composizione Francesco. mi piace. semplice ma d'effetto.
Maurizio

Great mood picture, Francesco! Good composition, a classic!

Well done once again Francesco on the choice of B/W. Very graphic shot and well composed.
TFS,
David
PS Many thanks for your comment on Apricot

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3312 W: 788 N: 4424] (19910)
  • [2006-03-31 16:52]

A simple image but which speaks much. I like the sobriety of the composition raised by the black and white. Bravo Francesco!
Annie

Hi Francesco,
wonderful simplicity and very strong mood...I wish I could fly away with the bird too! but only after the dark coulds are gone;)
lovely work!
Marija

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  • dada Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 909 W: 46 N: 382] (6560)
  • [2006-04-07 2:32]

what a beautiful composition... so simple but so strong... the contrast is great!

congrats!
anca

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  • jacobo Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 666 W: 31 N: 673] (4875)
  • [2006-04-12 10:05]

Very simple and very well performed.
Regards.
Jacobo

great minimalism! so space about the bird.. the freedom...

yes francesco,
just go ahead if you want,
just go ahead if you could.
if you are a bird,
fly to make up for lost time.

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  • benja Gold Star Critiquer [C: 67 W: 0 N: 1] (299)
  • [2006-05-25 7:18]

Hi Francesco!I like this shot for the b and w and for his simplicity!good work!
Benja

mi piace questa foto tanto perche certe volte mi sento come ocelo solo

Ciao Francesco
Che bella foto!.....la composizione anche se é semplice é geniale....mi piace moltissimo...magari per il contrasto tra il colore molto chiaro del cielo con l'ombra dell´uccello.
Fabiana

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