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Don't Smoke in Bed


Don't Smoke in Bed
Photo Information
Copyright: Gizmo Moroniko (Gizmo_Moroniko) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 10 W: 0 N: 6] (161)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-07-28
Categories: Mood
Camera: Minolta 400si
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-04-16 4:33
Viewed: 472
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I left a note on his dresser
And my old wedding ring
With these few goodbye words
How can I sing
Goodbye old sleepy head
I’m packing you in like I said

Take care of everything
I’m leaving my wedding ring
Don’t look for me
I’ll get a hand
Remember darling
Don’t smoke in bed

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  • cxxl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 135 W: 11 N: 73] (1335)
  • [2006-04-16 5:37]
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Its Over and Under exposed... but I think that's the point. I Like it.
Well done.
Chris

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  • Ejla Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 335 W: 13 N: 137] (2488)
  • [2006-04-25 18:22]

Sviđaju mi se ovi jaki kontrasti!

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  • Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 596 W: 71 N: 53] (5105)
  • [2006-04-30 17:11]

A photography that displays all and leaves nothing else to be added by the viewer is nothing but a window with frames. The real path to got the attention and curiosity is to leave some space for own interpretation and questions. True, your beautiful notes adds to the gusto, as one does not know if she is asleep, crying, smoking, talking on the phone or watching sumo wrestles on eurosport.

Size is disputable, but mood is excellent.

A.

it has it's own mood and i like it :) good contrast

Cheers,
Agata

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  • mugush Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 493 W: 42 N: 164] (1694)
  • [2007-03-28 18:02]

nice note and your photo matches the note.. kinda artistic work
thanks for sharing
Love
Mugush

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