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My daughters eye.


My daughters eye.
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Copyright: Janneke de With (Jan) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 384 W: 119 N: 608] (4029)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-04-17
Categories: Friends/Family
Camera: Fuji Finepix S7000
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-04-21 12:35
Viewed: 854
Points: 58
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I've got something with eyes....

This one is my daughters. She is 14 years old, and she doesn't mind me making photo's of her... :)Yoepie!!

About the photo. I used macro, give the photo clarity and B&W, thats it!

Have a great weekend, enjoy the sun!!
Greetings Janneke

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To DzULA: Thanks for your workshop!Jan 2 04-21 14:36
To blzbub: Thanks!Jan 1 04-21 13:47
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superb sharpness and details janneke :)
beautiful eye :)

koh

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  • carmia Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 307 W: 6 N: 125] (2901)
  • [2007-04-21 12:45]

Nice shot! excellent clearness , good work . Grretings!!

Superb eye and eye shot! The clarity is fantastic, the tones and the sharpness equally.

Great work! Yan :)

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  • Ejtaan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1087 W: 113 N: 1979] (9810)
  • [2007-04-21 13:06]

Beautiful Janneke.... Love the effect of the B/W
makes the image so much stronger!

Cool entry!

Cheers,
Anneke

Wonderful shot Janneke, can you advise camera/lens/iso/aperture etc... ??? I am always trying to get this kind of thing with my daughter!
TFS,
Neil.

Veeeery good macro, nice point of view, I thing you should let the color of hers eyes to be "hers" color. I have post a WORKSHOP and I think you'd like it.

Best regards
DzULA

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  • KellEy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 418 W: 48 N: 169] (2020)
  • [2007-04-21 14:40]

I want to learn how to take this type of photo well.
I do like the window reflection kind of symbolizing (to me) The eye is the window to the soul.
I think it would be really neat though to see a sunset reflection or maybe a flower?
It's a beautiful macro work with nice light.
TFS

Hallo J..
verry nice Picture with got POV and... SUPER!
Regards,
Ella

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1100 W: 0 N: 936] (9342)
  • [2007-04-21 18:27]

Hallo janneke,nou jij hebt wel zeer goed oog voor detail,en een dochter waar je trots op mag zijn.
Groeten van jan

Hello Janneke!
Great composition with perfect clarity and nice perspective!
Beautiful light!
Excellent done!
Lili

Hi Janneke, Awesome eye image! and B&W looks so nice on this...good tonal range, detail(wish the lashes was a bit more in the DOF but...oh well) but I believe your focus is right where you wanted it and should be. Crystal clear reflection. Very nicely captured! TFS!

Lyndon

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1186 W: 285 N: 1315] (7065)
  • [2007-04-22 6:40]

Hello Janneke.
Very nice photo. Good presentation of your daughter eye. Beautiful composition and looks very effective in balck and white. (great workshop of DzULA as well)
My compliments.
Janek J-23

:) pt later

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3445 W: 96 N: 3039] (19582)
  • [2007-04-22 12:18]

Very well seen, Janneke.
Jan

Bonjour Janneke.
Que dire à part que c'est splendide..........
Félicitations !

This is a great macro Janneke, superb detail.

Regards Mark

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1701 W: 0 N: 1] (11482)
  • [2007-04-24 6:22]

Mooie macro Janneke. Zo gaat dat met meisjes van 14.
Gr Jos

Excellente netteté on peut te voir dans le reflet de son l oeil c'est très bien fait!
Bravo
tiM

Hi Janneke:
excellent sharpmness and good B&W treatment here:)
I like that reflection in the eye...great presentation...and she does have beautiful eyes!
david

superb close-up! sharpness is excellent here and I like the choice of B/W for this image.
great job
J.

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  • NecipP Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 694 W: 18 N: 404] (4722)
  • [2007-05-02 18:26]

Hello Janneke this is really an awsome shot fine detail knife edge focus and a beauty to enjoy seeing tfs rgds Necip.

Simply splendid!!!
Steph.

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  • bemawu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 100 W: 64 N: 73] (1539)
  • [2007-05-10 11:25]

Hello Jan, what an excellent makro. I like the reflection in her eye and the composition. Goed gedaan.

A beautiful sharp eye.
Our eyes are so perfect, even the most powerful camera will not equal them.

nicely done

greetings ;)

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  • luloto Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 198 W: 11 N: 198] (1987)
  • [2007-05-14 17:56]

A spectacular macro. I like the details and the approach.
Bravo!!!

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  • kitka Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 231 W: 70 N: 218] (2092)
  • [2007-05-16 20:52]

Hello Janneke, this is wonderful macro, so brilliant! Well done, my congrats:-)
Regards
Katerina

This is beautiful, what a eye macro ! sharpness and DOF is truely good here, your PP and BW turn is really efficient and eyes catching
congratulations

Beautifull composition!!
So simple and so perfect!
very well done!

Hugo Tinoco

Excellent photo, Janneke! Great DOF, sharp, detail..! love it. TFS

Very great sharp picture. I like the b-w. That compleets the mood in this picture. Well done.

Groetjes,

Don

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2879 W: 368 N: 2718] (11723)
  • [2007-08-01 15:41]

En nu nog een, maar dan zonder die mascara ;o). Mooi, zelfs in z/w. Haar iris is echt een plaatje, zo gedetailleerd.
Op haar huid zou je een diffuse glow kunnen loslaten, moet ook een mooi effect geven.
TFS

great sharpness and details
many TFS your daughters' eye
ili :o)

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