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• ErikSven (2301)
• [2007-09-27 5:09]

Hello Elena,
Nice idea, but IMO your photo could be really strong if there hadn't been the following shortcomings:
- it's a pity you see this sign just behind the person looking up to the statue. It diminishes the "power" of the black silhouette;
- the museum building seems to suffer from stability problems, or could it be your photo is dangerously leaning towards the left? ;o)
Just my opinion, of course. Hope you don't mind.
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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• AKITA (12677)
• [2007-09-27 9:14]
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Dear Elena,
ha ha ha, "ErikSven" saw nothing, and his opinion is quite irrelevant...
it is very interesting and excellent that you took the solemn and humorous air of image in the museum. and beautiful and impressive B&W picture this is.
the balance of white-gray-black is just adequate, the gray banner of "museum cafe" is nice location and needs. and the inclination also needs and is good, because not only the total feeling of image gets movement, but also the relation between the viewer and the object (of course this is changeable) has defferent hight.
this is very artistic photo in museum, and may be used to guide book, if the curator has the wit.
thank you,
Akihisa

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• Lapin-Cretin (53)
• [2007-09-27 13:46]

Sorry i dont get it ,but its true the grey ,white and blac are quite nice ,same for the "men in black" lol

pishi,pishi ,poko,poko!!
VAL