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Copyright: Fourleaf Clover (Tinky) Silver Note Writer [C: 8 W: 2 N: 10] (291)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-05-11
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Pentax K100D Super, Pentax SMC-FA/F 100-300mm f/4.5-5.6
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-07-24 11:51
Viewed: 158
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This was taken at a playground next to the pub where we had our dinner.
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Tinky

I love this shot! The emotion is well captured - this boy does indeed look bored to tears or extremely deep in thought. The choice of greyscale works well as well.

A little suggestion for composition - please try to not capture the subject smack-bang in the middle of the photo. This rule does not apply 100% of the time though and in this case I may be tempted to not moan too much about it due to the balance in the picture. I would still suggest though tht the right hand side of the photo should have been cropped.

Despite the composition, I'm still awarding a double thumbs up for the mood and expression!

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