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afternoon sight


afternoon sight
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Copyright: Marco Rossi (Urfaust) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1548 W: 70 N: 2397] (10531)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-08
Categories: Daily Life, Architecture, Mood
Camera: Nikon D-80, Nikkor 18-200mm f/3.5-5.6 G ED AF-S VR
Exposure: f/9.0, 1/320 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-08-21 15:32
Viewed: 698
Points: 130
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
afternoon sight

the afternoon lights.. in the summer of Bergen..
a peacefull sight.. warm.. and now just gone!!
maybe everything is ephemeral..
and also these streets.. these colours..
maybe soon we’ll forget all..
and soon we’ll be forgotten at the same time..
...
“no eye, no ear, no nose, no tongue, no body or mind;
no form, no sound, no smell, no taste, no touch or mind object;
no realm of the eye,
until we come to no realm of consciousness”.
(1)

even if... also the beauty.. is a part of truth!

David Sylvian my mood


comments and critics are welcome
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Hello Marco!
Lovely houses in Norway!!!
Beautiful blue sky!
Very good perspective!
Nice frame!
Best regards!
Lili

Hello Marco,
very good POV. I like the depth of this picture and the blue sky in the background. Great composition.
Thanks for sharing
Helmut

Hi Marco,
Lovely house and architecture, Excellent perpective and details, Excellent POV. and beautiful sky,
My compliments
Michel

Hello Marco,
I speechless...
White... color of purity and innocence...
Amazing perspective and texture of street.
Magnificient my friend
TFS
Selahattin E

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  • trekks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1560 W: 118 N: 2574] (9946)
  • [2008-08-21 22:43]

hello Marco

Even though empty street, the view is a nice capture of the street scene showing great depth and composition with f/9.

Very interesting architecture detail.

tfs, bill

p/s interesting too to see 1st time such a comment by szatanowska :)

Hi Marco,

I already hoped for pictures from Bergen as well - have not yet been there - lovely walk through these old wooden houses.
Nice to see the weather was great as well.
A beautiful composition in which I can feel Norway.

TFS
Els

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 541 W: 30 N: 50] (6616)
  • [2008-08-21 23:20]

Hi Marco,
an interesting use of 18mm wide angle.
in this perspective, two vanishing points make the image space.
one is the depth of the raod in the shadow, and the other one is upper in the sky out of the picture. this warping space makes viewer's eye being really in the middle of the dark street, and the bright sky is covering the street and the viewer. the normal sight is well tasted by this perspective.
thank you,
Akihisa

Hi Marco,
What a stunning architectural view.Excellent POV, colours and perspective.TFS.
Cheers,

hAyAti

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  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 2515 W: 0 N: 993] (13806)
  • [2008-08-22 0:05]

Hola Marco,
preciosa calle,
construcciones típicas y maravilloso pov.
perfecto cielo excelente postal.
saludos

a beautiful street shot, Mario.. i like the POV very much.. make me tilt my head looking at this shot.. the sky is so blue and the old buildings are beautiful to look at.. a lovely finding.. tfs this beauty..

regards, terry

hello MArco
how are you friend?
wonderful composition my friend
tightly framed, wonderful skyline
lovely clouds, nice blue, when i come down then i have wonderful architecture in lovely white with coloured roof. the depth in the street is perfect. it is an awsome composition. lovely tones and fine sharpness.

Thanks for sharing

regards
MAnuj MEhta
:)soon

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  • Juliet Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 743 W: 35 N: 1573] (10367)
  • [2008-08-22 3:23]

Hi Marco,
Fantastic POV - colors and details are superb ! Well done and TFS Julie

Hello Marco,
excellent pov and light here,
and of course the perspective,
wonderful colours,
i specially love the beautiful sky,
welldone my dear friend and tfs,
regards,
Taner

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3116 W: 280 N: 6312] (24123)
  • [2008-08-22 5:49]

HI Marco
This looks like a town taking its afternoon nap :)
Superb composition, excellent colours -- and SO nice to have you back again
TFS
silke

"No, Time, thou shalt no boast that I do change!
Thy pyramids built up with newer might
To me are nothing novel, nothing strange;
They are but dressings of a former sight".
Shakespeare
wonderful sight and project.I give you shakespeare because is so great and you deserve it.You can´t change your touch. It´s here. thanks.
um abraço
teresa

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2162 W: 385 N: 2273] (24634)
  • [2008-08-22 7:07]

Merhaba dear Marco...
Excellent job with beautiful photo, wonderful colors and very beautiful composition....
Selamlar...
Milas...

Realy nice and quiet here,typical village-life,you kept the street very well out of the centre,good combination of colors with the white houses and the deep blue of the sky.
I think Holland is the place to go for you Marco!
jan

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  • Kiwis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1590 W: 0 N: 184] (12916)
  • [2008-08-22 15:09]

Ciao Marco,
Very excellent point of view and good perspective. I will repeat something you have already read but the sky is very great, the blue amazing. Don't ask me why but at first when I see your photo I thought of a village western :))) The imagination some times ... :))) Good job and great note to complementary. Ciao ciao
Bisous
Diane

Hello Marco,

A well composed presentation of one of the older parts of Bergen!
The details in the fine wooden houses are well reproduced, and the strong feeling of depth adds attraction to the image...
Good colour reproduction too!

Greetings,
Pablo -

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3715 W: 216 N: 3721] (28231)
  • [2008-08-23 2:39]

Hello Marco

I like the w pattern formed by the profile od the rooftops. The street adds good linear perspective. Excellent colour & sharpness. Tfs!

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3445 W: 96 N: 3035] (19568)
  • [2008-08-23 2:45]

Ciao Marco.
Really a Norske street. Lovely wooden houses, clean and tiedy.
Good looking picture.
Ciao ciao from Jan

Hello Marco,
I really like your POV for this shot. The composition is nice with great focus and depth. I like the uniform construction of the structures. The white structures with red roofs look great against the blue sky. Very nice work.
Regards,
Kevin

Later

beautifu..............................................................:)
Nice work my friend!
Ciao
A.

Hi Marco
beautiful x 303
did i breake the rule?????????????????
Great shot
Cheers,Braca

Hi dear friend,
should I say BEAUTIFUL? :)))
I won't. It's a meaningful one.
Nice light and mood in it.
Have a lovely Sunday,
Ioana

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1701 W: 0 N: 1] (11482)
  • [2008-08-23 11:09]

Hi Marco
BEAUTIFUL.
Gr Jos
P**

ciao Marco
gran bella prospettiva di queste case tipiche
ottimi colori e lavorazione
domani paella anche per te!!!
ciao
notte+
Lucio

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  • jan515 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2489 W: 48 N: 3013] (14304)
  • [2008-08-23 15:24]

Ciao Marco,
I like the composition and the brilliant colours, very well done.
Ciao ,janusz

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1520 W: 1 N: 143] (12288)
  • [2008-08-24 0:31]

striking those wooden houses… Fine and acerbity light

ciao dear marco
excellent lovely houses and street.excellent blue sky and lovely colours.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

Ciao Marco, belle e caratteristiche case, splendido il cielo, bravo, ciao Silvio

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1225 W: 65 N: 1692] (6983)
  • [2008-08-24 11:58]

Hello Marco,
Wonderful perspective, wonderful colours and light and a superb light capture and composition. Congrats, is a great photo.
mb
PS Congrats for the excelent taste in music, David Sylvian is very apropriated.

Hello Marco. Another top class image in your shelf. I like the sharpness, the detail and the depth created in the frame. The sky is just brilliant too. Regards. Jusni

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1899 W: 76 N: 0] (18829)
  • [2008-08-25 0:11]

Ciao Marco ;)
Great shot, perspective...impressive sky,
Best regards,
J ;)

Hi Marco,

Seems like mockup houses . . so clean and tidy . .
Beautifully presented . . I believe you did on purpose of having curved building on the right . .
Well done

Tfs,
Tjutjut

Well done Marco! Very nice picturesque photo of the place. Good use of the wide angle lens. The colours are superb.
Very sharp.
Good light/shadow control.
This is a place that look so nice to visit.
Thx for sharing.

Cheers! Yan

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*DiD i broke TL rules by this critique:))?
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We live in beautiful world..yeah we do..

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1528 W: 137 N: 2149] (19224)
  • [2008-08-25 7:54]

Hello Marco! Very nice atmosphere from this great composition, well seen and well done, thanks!

Mario

Prywitanne Marco!
beautiful street with interesting houses!good compo!i don't know but i think that this is USA (at first).i like it!=)
ALiaksandr

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  • sela Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 370 W: 1 N: 231] (2448)
  • [2008-08-25 13:42]

Hi Marco, wonderful presentation. I love the characteristic of these houses.I just want to have a walk there.May be I find a little place to live there for some time. It looks very inviting.TFS
Regards Rose

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  • ttreen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1553 W: 119 N: 3630] (14840)
  • [2008-08-25 13:52]

Hello Marco
The sky is really amazing.. Making the little shops stand out more.. nice pov as well...

Tricia

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  • cinca Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 361 W: 2 N: 87] (3396)
  • [2008-08-25 15:01]

Ciao Marco, bellissimo wideangle in cui anche la curvatura acquista valore visivo rinforzando la prospettiva. Ottimi i colori e la dof. Ah, magari vedessimo la strada verso la consapevolezza con la nitidezza della tua immagine!
Ciao, cinzia

Hi Marco,

Such a quaint little village. Looks like I place I must visit one day. The details of the buildings and their roofs are very nice. Also, the blue sky is lovely. Where are all of the people? Eating lunch? :D

ciao, Lisa

ciao Marco,
a great creation with nice POV and
excellent norwegian mood

greetings sERGIO

Great wide sweeping shot down this street Marco.
You successfully captured a mood in this landscape shot,
Great excitement and colors.
Well done.
- Vincent

beautiful houses shot in perspective way, good composition Marco, well saturated colors here, sharp and well seen all around.an HDr like image.TFS.
regards..................andres

Great detail, POV, and exposure my friend.
Cheers,
Dennis

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  • clic Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 712 W: 0 N: 172] (4169)
  • [2008-08-26 8:42]

Ciao amico Marco
...And the buildings bowed on your route!!
Ciao
Robert

Hi Marco,

A very pleasant view, I like very much this wide angle image, the effective POV also the beautiful colors in the afternoon light. Excellent done!
Best regards,
Sorina

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2084 W: 59 N: 2651] (14659)
  • [2008-08-26 14:59]

Hi Marco...
Another excellent catch, nicely done..!
Fine image, colors and details...
Best regards,
George

Almost surreal feel to this empty street, as if abandoned. Maybe the tilt of the houses and cloud direction contributes to that. Like a scene in a dream... about to be whisked away ....
Cheers
Otto

Salut Marco :)

Belle cette photo ! Elle me donne le vertige ... le mouvement d'ensemble me fait pencher vers la droite :) Les couleurs sont sublimes et la lumière extrêmement bien gérée, bravo !
Du bon travail comme d'hab !
Bisous
Marylou ;)

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2879 W: 368 N: 2718] (11723)
  • [2008-08-28 4:53]

Beautiful houses, a nice sky, and overall nice colours, Marco. Exposure is well handled here. I'd definitely try straightening out the verticals in the houses though, the wide angle and a tilt of the sensor really makes them converge...
Anyway, TFS

Hello Marco,
What a wonderful perspective and what a way to show off the houses of Norway.
Excellent POV, colours and sky.
Well done!
Joni

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  • tafa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 153 W: 3 N: 123] (1347)
  • [2008-08-29 0:07]

hi
Splendid photo with fascinating and fantastic colours, I like a lot !Have a good day!
SASO
...MACEDONIA...

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  • Kli Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 181 W: 11 N: 149] (1370)
  • [2008-08-29 8:04]

Une ambiance un peu fantastique ici ... :)
Les maisons .. et ce ciel qui donne l'impression qu'il y a deux mondes qui évoluent dans deux espaces temps, l'un plus rapide que l'autre ...
Est-ce que je vais voir surgir Harry Potter ??? ;)

Bises.

Pascalie.

Hi Marco,

Beautiful place and a very lovely picture.
It's very relaxing, so subtle and calm. Nice perspective and tones. I love it:)
Best,
Iza

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1264 W: 17 N: 629] (11529)
  • [2008-08-31 1:49]

A beautiful picture!! Very nice pov and the colors and detail are excellent! TFS and have a great day!

Hey Marco !
fantastic colours, perspective and contrasts :-)
Well done.
Best regards, Daniel

Great shot. Nice depth here. Good texture and archetecture.

ciao Marco
gran bella prospettiva di queste case tipiche
ottimi colori e lavorazione,splendido il cielo....ma...io preferisco la tua "Photographer's note" afternoon sight...e' MEARVIGLIOSA...

un abbraccio afetuoso
biljana

Great composition and POV. Beautiful colours and sharpness.

greetings,

figen

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1147 W: 62 N: 806] (12527)
  • [2008-09-16 6:58]

Hi Marco,
beautiful houses and architecture.Good perspective.Amazing sky.TFS.Necla.

Bonjour Marco,
J'aime beaucoup la perspective de cette rue, on diarait que ces maisons vont se livrer combat armées du porte drapeaux qui pourrait leur servir de lances, enfin, c'est mon point de vue!!!!
Les couleurs sont ravissantes et ce joli ciel norvégien est toujours aussi bleu!!!
Amitiés
Odile

ciao Marco,

Wooooooow, i like everything of this pict including your note.
Great !!!

regards, willemien

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