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trying new with a classic


trying new with a classic
Photo Information
Copyright: Jean Christophe Jacques (jonathanhart) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1613 W: 243 N: 1273] (11521)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-26
Categories: Nature, Architecture
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/100 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Travelogue: des Landes à Dubrovnik
Date Submitted: 2008-08-30 12:28
Viewed: 278
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
after an horizontal framing posted on TE, here a vertical version of my attempt to make a different composition with a mostly photographed place,
in fact I never have seen such composition of this place including this foreground, even if I'm sure at 200% it has already be done, quite different way to see Bled Lake, this wooden path is an interesting information for those who don't know the place... now you know there is a little wooden path just near the water, and even if it's cloudy with some raindrops falling (not at this precise moment) the walf along the lake is a fantastic experience,
I remember with my friends we photographed the 5 first minuts, and then stopped to enjoy the best as possible the view, quiet, silently sitting on this wooden path...

(PP: gamma, sharpness & more saturation, maybe not necessary, not done on TE version)
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Salut,

Excellente photo, tout y est.
Ligne d'horizon magistrale, netteté, bon POV.
Calme et détente.
Bien réussi, beau travail
Daisy

Hi Jonathan Hart

Very good POV and such a pretty scene! Where is this place?

The wooden path, imo, works well in this picture.
Very well taken.

Cheerios
Esther

Je ne dénie pas la qualité de ta photographie, avec cette diagonale formée par le bois de cette jetée, mais ma préférence va vers ta présentation horizontale sur TE, je m'y sens moins à l'étroit (c'est bizarre de dire cela non?), même si le paysage y est tout aussi beau.
Tes couleurs sont superbes, ce vert émeraude saisissant. Et cette île qui ressort sous ce ciel qui annonce la pluie. Belle qualité et beaucoup à voir, bravo Jonanthan.
Corinne

a beautiful scenery with a reflective calm water.
the wood path is however given too much a space, just mho.
the tower and its reflection is the jewel here.

TFS
regards
Agoes

Bonjour Jonathan,

j'aime toujours cette vue mais je préfère toutefois celle que tu as postée sur TE avec le ponton un peu moins présent.
Sinon j'aime vraiment la lumière sur ce paysage.

Amicalement
Laurent

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  • RSK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 305 W: 73 N: 457] (3866)
  • [2008-08-31 16:14]

Hi Jo,I'm not sure if I like the heaviness of this wooden walkway,not sure if it balances well with the serenity of the
background,I still have lots to learn I guess.I wonder,after reading your notes,if you happened to take an image with your friends sitting on this walkway with the same background,it would be nice to see how it would compare to this view.

Ron

Hello Jonathan !

A superb and smart composition with a textbook depth of field and sharpeness. Just lovely work overall.

Well thought and presented.
Sincerely,
Robert

i think i recognised this place from someone here who posted it a month ago if im not mistaken.. she and her husband went to this place too..

anyway a lovely shot from your point of view.. tfs..

regards, terry

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1098 W: 0 N: 933] (9332)
  • [2008-09-09 12:36]

Despide the grey weather you made it fantastic Jo,good setiing !
jan

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