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Flower
Photo Information
Copyright: Francois Richon (Resize) (8)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-08
Categories: Nature
Camera: Pentax K100D Super
Exposure: f/74099368.0
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-08-27 6:53
Viewed: 489
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [French]
A flower on the path to the hotel
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nice flower, be careful not to put the subject in the center of composition.

Welcome to TL.
It's very good as a first post, thanks for sharing.

Atri

  • Good 
  • iryb (0)
  • [2008-08-27 10:20]

flower is to close to middle for me and also is too small. maybe crop some of dark area around side off picture

Hi Francois,

Welcome to TL.

Nice shot for first, But it's better than to closer more and recompos it. I post a workshop on your shot and hope you like it.

Success,
Daryoosh

  • Great 
  • c_rapp Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 957 W: 20 N: 1282] (7282)
  • [2008-08-27 19:13]

Welcome to TL first off now the picture is great nice sharp details and color great play with light and shadows I think you could have off centred it a little, but then again part of me likes that you didn't. all the great green and thew ittle flower. good work. TFs
Christan

Welcome to TL, Francois!! :)

Nice shot, friend. This flower is very beautiful.

As our friends have said, be carefull not to put the subject in the center of composition.

Take a look at the WS I posted on your shot. I really hope you like it!

Best regards and welcome again, friend!
Bruno

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