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Dart Grip


Dart Grip
Photo Information
Copyright: Caner kkj (caner) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 19 W: 1 N: 0] (116)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-01
Categories: Artwork
Camera: Canon EOS 3000V, Canon EF 28-90mm / f 4-5.6
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-01-05 9:50
Viewed: 933
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I used to play a lot with em but ı got fed up, when i said "play" i meant more than ten years.
Anyway enjoy.
::))
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A very good idea and composition Caber, but grainy and unsharp. IMO... try again
TFS

dammit.. if we are not givin comments on this, then wat are we doing on treklens.. ??this is surely a beautiful macro with the perfect focus.. truly lovable..the grain, light n focus..all are perfectly in harmony. i guess a little more light wud have done wonders but still this rocks

welcome to TL caner :)
i like the shallow DOF and grainy look here
it works well with your composition

points added :)

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1286 W: 153 N: 729] (8681)
  • [2006-01-09 16:19]

HELLO CANER!
This is a good choice as a first psoting! The DOF is very interesting and perfectly managed!
I also enjoy the choice of b&w which gives a mood to the whole composition!
Congratulations.
Luci

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  • diana Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 208 W: 24 N: 94] (1115)
  • [2006-01-13 8:09]
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Hi Caner!

I like this work very much, seems very graphic and the p&b seems the right choice for this type of objects!!Congratulations!!

regards
diana

Intersting play with DoF, sharpness and grain. Good choice of B&W

caner,
alan derinliği ile çok güzel oynamışsın,bunlara dart oku değilde harpoon desen yutturabilirdin:-) siyah beyaz güzel olmuş,sanki gelip te insana saplanacaklarmış gibi duruyor.
saygılar

Nice idea, the shallow DOf, B&W and grainy effect are all strong points that make your shot very nice.
Vassilis

Hi,
Nice image. Maybe a tighter crop would be better for the composition. I like the DOF.

TFS,
Pedro

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  • clic Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 758 W: 0 N: 206] (4714)
  • [2006-02-10 18:24]

Bonjour Caner
These threatening stings seem to fly right on my chest, so I have to leave before getting hurt!
Superbe!
Robert Deschênes

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