paper strawberry

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• rychousmama (228)
• [2007-08-16 9:43]
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Hi ME ;) Nice work here! I love all the rich deep reds and the amount of shadows and tones here. The close-up point of view, looking into the paper strawberry creates a beautiful abstract work and I love all the patterns with the diamond shapes. I might have tried for a slightly heavier tilt OR would have just taken the shot with the diamonds going perfectly straight across, for balance. I love though the shadows that show heavier at the left, with the right side more illuminated. The clarity and focus are pretty good, and I like the metering and exposure. I used to love playing with those paper fruit decorations at parties! TFS!
-Lara

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• Werewolf (26142)
• [2007-08-16 10:17]

Great observation!
It's an excellent play of light and shadow on the patern full of surface who pay in a very harmonious way, the game of clarity ind blur nuances!

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• karith (7409)
• [2007-08-16 11:05]

Fascinating! My eyes are pulled deep into the recesses of these honeycomb shapes. Where are the red bees? Or the red honey? Oh, I almost forgot...it's a strawberry...LOL! Great macro subject and well done:)

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• cclaudiu (0)
• [2007-08-16 12:19]
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Good idea and well taken but I think it works better in b&w, the red being too strong and distracting.

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• nova (8653)
• [2007-08-16 17:47]

Nice artwork! Very graphical,modern and attractive.Beautiful black frame! Well done!
Michel

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• Moyano (0)
• [2007-12-12 9:41]

Great compo. Intense red gradations, render the whole very intimate.
Makes me think about a heart with the inside of a bee-hive...:)

Nice work!

Natalia