Flower

Critiques [Translate]

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• tonycongo (97)
• [2008-08-27 7:07]

nice flower, be careful not to put the subject in the center of composition.

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• avesta (744)
• [2008-08-27 9:17]

Welcome to TL.
It's very good as a first post, thanks for sharing.

Atri

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• iryb (0)
• [2008-08-27 10:20]

flower is to close to middle for me and also is too small. maybe crop some of dark area around side off picture

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• datis (603)
• [2008-08-27 11:55]
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Hi Francois,

Welcome to TL.

Nice shot for first, But it's better than to closer more and recompos it. I post a workshop on your shot and hope you like it.

Success,
Daryoosh

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• c_rapp (6702)
• [2008-08-27 19:13]

Welcome to TL first off now the picture is great nice sharp details and color great play with light and shadows I think you could have off centred it a little, but then again part of me likes that you didn't. all the great green and thew ittle flower. good work. TFs
Christan

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• brunorsantana (1259)
• [2008-08-28 6:17]
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Welcome to TL, Francois!! :)

Nice shot, friend. This flower is very beautiful.

As our friends have said, be carefull not to put the subject in the center of composition.

Take a look at the WS I posted on your shot. I really hope you like it!

Best regards and welcome again, friend!
Bruno