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Alone but Alive(2)


Alone but Alive(2)
Photo Information
Copyright: Emad poursohrab (emad) (35)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-09-01
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon F55, zoom 28-80f:3.3-5.6 Nikkor, 58 mm UV
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-04-11 12:42
Viewed: 670
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
staying alone but alive needs deepseated roots.excuse me for bad composition.;-)
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Hi Emad,
I'm not sure why you post this image, since you find the composition so bad..?
Here you have three elements... the tree that is your main subject, the sky and the ground... Three elements should be possible to handle, but difficult at the same time...
I've done a workshop for you, where I have tried to emphasise the elements differently... More weight on the tree by cropping tighter, reducing the boring ground by cropping away quite a bit, and keep the sky since it is a good element... Have a look, and enjoy!
Greetings,
Pablo -

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  • dada Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 909 W: 46 N: 382] (6560)
  • [2006-04-11 13:47]
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the compo isn't really bad, you caught so well those wonderful colours... and pablo did a great PP work!
if you want to start with an easy PP you can download for free picassa form google... try it!

tfs
anca

i donīt think that composition is bad...i love people and staying with them keeps me alive, but to know that i love them i must spend time alone and than just see how bug value it has to be with someone...and we were born as one, we live as one and die as well..and this picture is so strong
thanks for seeing this
best regurds
olga

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