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nader shah


nader shah
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Copyright: ebrahim varmaziyar (ev_ir) (54)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2002-02-24
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-12-17 18:48
Viewed: 648
Points: 2
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king nader shah
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POV is good, but I think you need to correct brightness and contrast of the photo.

OK! Now you have found the better subject. Now it's all down to presentation. You have already a really good diagonal in there. A small crop to left and right to position that diagonal in a frame and that's fixed. Rendition needs some more 'punch' - it's OK to stretch the truth for visual impact.
Oh - save any further explanation, I'll show what I mean. Please see simple workshop. It will appear later, about 16:45 Hong Kong time TOMORROW, as will an appropriate 'token'.
If you need to know how to add frames, please ask.
If there is a language problem ... a little Arabic in this house but no Farsi.

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