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Seashore enthusiasm


Seashore enthusiasm
Photo Information
Copyright: abbas nayeblooie (mycpo) (2)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-07-16
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/500 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-07-19 1:15
Viewed: 133
Points: 2
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To rewshearer: Thanks for your commentmycpo 1 07-21 05:35
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Welcome to TrekLens Abbas

A fun image - the sense of open space is fantastic and the placement of the child towards the left edge of the frame is good, to give us a feeling of progression.

I think you could have placed the horizon higher in the frame, and the image would be more powerful; 'rule of thirds' would work well in this photo.

Also maybe crop out the stick on the right hand side, it is an unnecessary distraction in my opinion.

If you enjoy receiving comments on your photos, I suggest a Photographer's Note. Most TL members will not critique if there is no note.

Rew

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