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composition no.4


composition no.4
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Copyright: ershad fatahian (ercool200) (109)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Sony Cybershot DSC-F828
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-04-26 15:34
Viewed: 472
Points: 8
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I love the light... a glod and black photo... intimate atmosphere for a conversation.
Well done!!

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  • Tintin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2198 W: 267 N: 345] (1982)
  • [2006-04-26 19:54]

Very interesting picture, Ershad. I really like the light that come through the window and replicate the colours on the floor in the foreground. The two friends in conversation add a very intimate feel to this picture. Well done!

hey ershad!
i like the capture of light and the way it reflects on the floor. for the technical aspect, i think a more centre aligned pov would have worked much better or getting rid of the reflecting columns!

keep up the good work
-Bartek

Workfull and stimuling impression! At first the square of reflection intriguing for just one second. Why he is not on all the floor. Is it another piece to the left? No! Cause the reflection go in the same sence then the principal window and.. Haa! There is a carpet! :) I enjoy the colorf light play in some tiny line reflection too and the contrast. Good to see the persons in background!

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