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My Cousin


My Cousin
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Copyright: amir ramezanpour (amir_r) (16)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-01-08
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/208 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-01-13 10:22
Viewed: 1291
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 17
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A very prety girl Amir. Nice colors and sharpess. But I would suggest you should not centre your subject in this way. I have done a workshop just as a suggestion, you may want to do this in another way, but you will see that this enhances the expression on your cousins face and takes away all the unnecessary background...

Don't get me wrong this is a great shot. And look forward to seeing your future work. Welcome to TL.

Very pretty girl indeed, and I also agree that the background is unnecessary and so something similar to the workshop done here would make this picture resonating in the eye. Great work.

  • Great 
  • padre Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 1419 W: 90 N: 263] (4035)
  • [2005-01-13 11:56]

Hi Amir and welcome to TL. This is nice and soft with pleasing skin tones. There may be a very slight pink/red/orange color cast but not enough to harm the image. I have the most difficulty in trying to get skin tones correct. Keep on shooting!

Beautiful portrait with a beautiful model.

Beautifull little girl, a close crop will help to eliminate distracting bgr. Good shot none the less, well done!

سلام امير جان
عكس خيلي زيبايي گرفتي
من فكر مي كنم ما بايد در اين سايت بتونيم يه جورايي با خارجيها رقابت بكن و نام ايران رو هميشه توي ليست داشته باشيم .
لطفاً ادامه بده .

قربانت " مازيار"

Hi Amir, forgot to write you a note. I worked with a WS version of this very nice photo, got late, posted it but forgot to write. A very special photo, she looks really lovely, a soft smile, a nice look and the light well balanced. I thought the plastic in the background was a bit disturbing so a WS is atached to this note. Just like fotofrancis wrote, it just for fun, no bad photo, Be sure of that!
See you on next posting, Richard

you have a nice cousin.

The workshop image was cropped just a little bit too much for me as I liked her upper hair around the part in it. Maybe a 'custom crop' of some sort could remove the red duct tape for example. Shooting in macro mode might have fuzzed the background enough. Well done lighting, etc.

  • Good 
  • pix Silver Star Critiquer [C: 44 W: 0 N: 0] (1027)
  • [2006-10-28 10:10]

Thanks for nice shot, good contrast.

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