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Kervan


Kervan
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Copyright: Afshin Memarian (pix) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 44 W: 0 N: 0] (1027)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-02-10
Categories: Transportation
Camera: nikon coolpix 4500
Exposure: f/4.7
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-02-26 9:03
Viewed: 514
Points: 10
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I can't believe this one went uncritiqued...it's excellent! The colours and DOF are very good, plus the tight crop works well. The only thing distracting is the pole (flag?) above the camel's head, it's easy to clone it out.
Great photo, congratulations!!
Marija

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  • Mitra Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1254 W: 75 N: 902] (7908)
  • [2006-02-27 9:27]

Great photo. The colors very good plus the crop works well.
Mitra

ajab asemoni!

I'd agree with Maria, the flag pole looks distracting. Even though there are lot of things going on this photo which almost tends to be noisy, I appreciate the business of photo, since it maybe a market or the sort. It has potential but lacks sharpness and colors need to be tweaked up a notch.

Thanks for sharing!

UPDATE: Hope you don't mind the workshop.

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  • bebu Gold Star Critiquer [C: 272 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-03-09 6:08]

Hi, Afshin.
Very good capture but a lot of things on backgound. I had WS for you :o)
Bebu

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