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Suicide
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Copyright: Mehdi Hosseini (metall) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 301 W: 28 N: 158] (2956)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005
Categories: Abstract
Camera: Panasonic Lumix DMC-FZ20
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-07-11 14:39
Viewed: 633
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Suicide.
"TO BE OR NOT TO BE"
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  • dada Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 909 W: 46 N: 382] (6560)
  • [2006-07-11 14:41]

nobody can take his life, because that life isn't his property... if he could not give life, why take it?

the message is very sugestive, but I don't like the "idea"

hug,
anca

I think you have got the right to share your feelings and emotion, even some do not agree... I think suicide is a way to tell something, and if someone want to commit suicide, it is her/his own choice. I don't agree with Anca about life and "property". We live our lifes and we do what we want of it...
It reminds me the song in the movie "MASH" :

hrough early morning fog I see

visions of the things to be

the pains that are withheld for me

I realize and I can see...

that suicide is painless

It brings on many changes

and I can take or leave it if I please.

I try to find a way to make

all our little joys relate

without that ever-present hate

but now I know that it's too late, and...

The game of life is hard to play

I'm gonna lose it anyway

The losing card I'll someday lay

so this is all I have to say.

The only way to win is cheat

And lay it down before I'm beat

and to another give my seat

for that's the only painless feat.

The sword of time will pierce our skins

It doesn't hurt when it begins

But as it works its way on in

The pain grows stronger...watch it grin, but...

A brave man once requested me

to answer questions that are key

is it to be or not to be

and I replied 'oh why ask me?'


'Cause suicide is painless

it brings on many changes

and I can take or leave it if I please.

...and you can do the same thing if you please."

About the photo. A good entry in the egg serie

the photo is extremely well done.

To tell you the truth...I "see" a force pushing the egg.

The suicide is not our choice,Is the most evil trap...
I think you know this.

This is why i feel that the egg is pushed.I hope you understand what I mean.

Sabina

life has so much beauty to offer, so many good things to live for, sad that we sometimes have moments of 'blindness'...
You are NEVER alone, M, (*_*)

dEar Mehdi,
Suicide,No,Never,I'm not Agree with this,God gaves us life and just God giveback our life,
Very good photo,Excellent light,Great Idea,
Thanks

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  • btokaz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1060 W: 127 N: 167] (5744)
  • [2006-07-11 17:38]

Very good composed and I like the idea...
Tomasz

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3547 W: 737 N: 2383] (18956)
  • [2006-07-12 6:38]

I don't like at all the idea but the photo is very good.


take care,
v

I am impressed by the way you expressed the idea...the egg being on the very edge, so little needed to fall...or stay.
The idea of suicide...very controversial to me. I like to think we have freedom to do with our lives what we want, because otherwise we are not free. I just wish everyone was strong enough NOT to choose to terminate it.
Thanks Mehdi.

The simplicity of the subject and blue tones are awesome. Good job well done.

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  • Mitra Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1254 W: 75 N: 902] (7908)
  • [2006-07-12 21:44]

Again another creative & great shot. I like the colors & frame too. Well done.
Mitra

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  • MikiM Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 36 W: 5 N: 19] (278)
  • [2006-07-13 2:44]

HI Mehdi,
Very clever composition. The unbalanced prosition of the subjects in the frame enhanced very well the story of your picture.
Well done!
Congrats,
Miklós

It's awesome, congrats Mehdi :)
Cheers,
Mohammadreza

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