Sweet Face

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• blakitan (868)
• [2006-07-28 17:02]

Hi Masume,
Great potrait. Very nice in B&W. Creative shot and PP works.

Ben Lakitan

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• farshid (463)
• [2006-07-28 19:07]

Hi masume
wow nice framin BLACK.
having the backgroun in black and white made is amazing.

cute model
is she your classmate?
at the end(cheshmam roshan,khanom hejabet ko? hehe)

best regards
::Farshid::

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• lemuel (213)
• [2006-07-28 19:34]

Hello Masume,

Lovely photo. She is very pretty. Nice effect on the background, it made a good contrast on her hair.

I would want more PP treatment on her hair. There still are some rough edges and didn't blend with the background well

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• rewshearer (14834)
• [2006-07-29 5:17]

Hi Masume
Definitely a sweet face. Very pretty model and I'd like to see what else you can do, I think her hand is a big distraction here, it gets more attention than her face.
Good light and expression though, well done.
Rew

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• metall (2946)
• [2006-07-29 15:03]

Framing and bachground in perfect Masi!
It really nice coposed and croped. A professional shot indeed.

Congrats

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• Tintin (1974)
• [2006-07-29 18:32]

Very nicely done, Masume. Wonderful expression on the face of your friend and it is interesting how she seems to fade into the black frame. The bright white light behind her is interesting as well but seems to bleed into the top of her hand. A very nice portrait. Well done!

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• pablominto (27380)
• [2006-07-30 1:31]

Hello Masume,
You capture her joyful expression very well!
Pleasant portrait work, nice framing and well composed...
Nice work indeed!
Regards,
Pablo -

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• orkhan (3524)
• [2006-09-26 18:42]

Very nice portrait.
TFS