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oO( Loneliness )Oo


oO( Loneliness )Oo
Photo Information
Copyright: Javad Tabrizchi (jaja1970) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 299 W: 17 N: 236] (1109)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-11-02
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Pentax *ist DL, Pentax SMC DA 18-55mm F3.5-5.6, RAW 400 ISO, Kenko ND4 77mm
Exposure: f/4, 1/20 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-01-06 8:00
Viewed: 686
Points: 50
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
oO( Loneliness )Oo

Motivation:
After a good rain on morning I had some walks on Tajrish and alleys around in afternoon, during this short period I saw this old man was sitting on steps in front of a ruined house. He was in a sad day dream.
I thought he is so lonely and he might be in memories of beloved people.
After I took his picture suddenly he waked up and looked around.
As for back ground house it seems that this house is not in use because of very old structures and locked out door

Location:
Sãad Abad Street, Tajrish (Shemiran) Tehran.


P.P. Job:
I made some adjustments in Photo Shop CS2 including color, level and contrast.

-=Hope you love my job=-
Javad.

Tintin, broadcaster, hay_kes, kokos101, rater, HaBeMa, Mitra, SkyF, YasminesDad, Emma, ixtanbul7, pranab, samansarraf, gypsygirl58, cstathoulis, Bichoo has marked this note useful
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A picture with lots of emotions, Javad. I like how you have captured this man who seems very sad & lonely on the steps of this old house. Nicely composed with good light & colours. Well done!

Salam Javad.
Very nice composition, I like it texture of the wall.
Thanks for sharing.

Yasin.

Salam Aziz kardeshim Javad,
Excellent daily life shot.POV, Details, sharpness, colours and framing are perfect.Very well captured my friend.Congrat!

TFS.

hAyAti

I seriously doubt this guy is lonely but i like the idea and the title. Describing this image with loneliness makes it funny and thus deserves the points;)!

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  • rater Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 201 W: 52 N: 111] (957)
  • [2007-01-06 14:00]

Good omposition, well done. I like your note, I do think he has lots of memories to share... and nobody there now to share them. TFS

Hi Javad,
I think you have a very powerful sense and wide eye!
Good luck.

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  • HaBeMa Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 533 W: 33 N: 620] (3070)
  • [2007-01-06 15:20]

Selam Javad;This old man Motivation?Oh I can my friend,nice photo and your note explanatory....
Habema.
:-]

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  • Mitra Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1255 W: 75 N: 902] (7906)
  • [2007-01-06 19:38]

Great shot with full of emotion & history. Well seen & done.
Mitra

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  • nana Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 129 W: 1 N: 116] (908)
  • [2007-01-07 3:23]

You have captured this feeling of lonelyness very well in this shot, I love the tones and the compostion well caught...

Oops run out of points will be back later to remedy this:)

Nana

hello javad!
wonderful photo with great note and story.
yes, i like your job.
tfs
zoran

pt

Salam Javad,
Nice photo with great composition,pov,colors,timing,note and frame.TFS
Chris

hello Javad! great shot! fantastic capture!nice note and story!TFS
Regards

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  • Emma Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1403 W: 6 N: 1919] (10149)
  • [2007-01-08 7:24]

Hello Javad,
Good lightly and detail. Very good composition and a very interesting picture.
Would congratulate.
Eva

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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1666 W: 136 N: 1263] (6138)
  • [2007-01-08 8:13]

Hello Javad,
you captured the mood very well, this really shows the mans emotion. Great POV and excellent crop. Your composition is fablous, love the colors and the great textures.
Sky

No other title could have described his mood Javad.. chained-up door behind him makes this composition a very strong one.. well seen

aK

nice colors good compo. TFs

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  • pranab Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 734 W: 0 N: 537] (3141)
  • [2007-01-12 13:44]

javad,
like the color contrast and saturation here.great amount of details. you have captured the mood of the moment very nicely.

Hi Dear Javad
A nice shot with a good cadre ! You did the best , Really You can put it in decisive moment category .
Stay in touch
Saman

Hi Javad,
Nice composition, lots of emotions! Well spotted. TFS Cheers Tina :-)

Hi Javad,

A great daily life photo!! I like the warm colours and lighting! You've captured the feeling of lineliness very well here!

Regards
Constantinos

very nice pic.
i like mood.
i like this pic.
thank u.

Salam Javad,

Nice work, well captured of the daily life in Tehran. TFS

Fara

Hello Javad
Good shot. The detail of the walls and its colorful one, as opposed to the unnoticed thing of the subject, do of which this has, a good composition. Excellent work.
John

Photo with great impact
Ruud

hi Javad,

What his doing ? waiting for someone or his crying for someting ?
this is great shot with a natural human life.
compo and tone colours are perfect too.
very welldone.

Haldian

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