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Portrait
Photo Information
Copyright: Masroor Sheidaei (Masroor) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 107 W: 12 N: 36] (342)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-01
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/30 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): PRECIOUS MOMENTS [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-04-05 10:28
Viewed: 628
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My wife with her sister's daughter.
Please kindly let me have your critiques. Thanks!
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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To Milvio: Thanks!Masroor 1 06-08 20:52
To mesquens1: Thanks!Masroor 1 05-23 21:01
To rminkow: Thanks!Masroor 1 05-02 20:53
To ErikSven: Thanks!Masroor 1 04-13 05:42
To Mujahid-Awais: Thanks!Masroor 1 04-13 05:37
To sara_hossini: Thanks!Masroor 1 04-11 22:09
To nishantdavid: Thanks!Masroor 1 04-10 04:12
To omidaraghi: Thanks!Masroor 1 04-09 20:53
To mariajosecon: Thanks!Masroor 1 04-08 01:25
To rewshearer: Thanks!Masroor 1 04-06 20:58
To EOSF1: Thanks!Masroor 1 04-06 20:57
To japiey: Thanks!Masroor 1 04-06 00:10
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Critiques [Translate]

Hi Masroor,

Superb shot.
Their expressions are lovely.
All my wishes for them..
Take care..
A PRECIOUS MOMENT !!!!

jp

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1521 W: 123 N: 2178] (20035)
  • [2008-04-06 9:32]
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Hello Masroor, very nice portrait! You did a great job in the composition, the lighting and the exposure. Well done, thanks!

Mario

Nice, simple portrait - well composed with good use of available light. The black-on-black has its challenges, I can't really see where your subject's clothes end and the background begins, but it's great work overall.
Rew

Masroor:

Welcome to TL!! This portarit is wonderfully executed, the light is rigt, the sharpness, not to speak about your wonderful and beautiful family!!
Congratulations

María José

hi
Beautiful portrait...

Hello Masroor
This is a nice shot
Good Use of Black as only the subjects are being highlighted. Great emotions uve captured. The mother looks proud of his child.

nice shot. But photo editing is not very well. specially around the red cap.you should decreese feature size.

Hello Masroor,
I see someone placed your photo in a theme called "precious moments". This IS, indeed, a precious moment, rendered in an authentic way with natural colours and a good pose of your two "models".
Like Rew says, combining black clothes and a black background is quite challenging, but it gave me an idea for another framing which I'll post as a WS.
TFS & kind regards from Belgium,
Erik

Masroor Bhai, Beautiful portrait of the real love. God bless your family.

Hi Masroor..this is a beautiful shot...great light and tones..wonderful sharpness and composition...very nice work.

Roger

Hi Masroor,
Very good portrait. Great composition and POV
Greetings
Raimundo

Hola Masroor.
Bella imagen, muy tierna.
Felicidades por tan buen trabajo.
Saludos Milvio.

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