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My kid in my heart


My kid in my heart
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Copyright: farish Mehr (farish) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 17 W: 2 N: 0] (128)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-06-06
Categories: Friends/Family
Camera: OLYMPUS E410, Zuiko Digital 14-42mm
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/20 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-06-21 5:12
Viewed: 414
Points: 18
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Hi Farish,

Sweet little baby photo! I like the way the baby is bundled in the blanket, peeking out to take a look! Nice bright, smiling eyes! Adorable.

thanks for sharing, Lisa

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  • kross1 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 569 W: 11 N: 1087] (4376)
  • [2008-06-21 8:01]
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Hi Farish,
I like this very tender shot of this little one. A very nice portrait indeed. One suggestion would be to try to keep the focal point on the eyes. Anyway it is a great picture.
Regards,
Kevin

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3312 W: 788 N: 4423] (19906)
  • [2008-06-21 11:10]
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Hi Farish,
I can to understand your pride!
Lovely pose and good rendered of colors here.
I agree with Kevin about the focus on the eye!
However it is a beautiful portrit of your child!
Regards! Annie

Hello Farish,

Excellent portrait of a lovely baby!
Congratulations!
Sergio

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  • rminkow Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1937 W: 102 N: 2504] (15371)
  • [2008-06-21 20:05]
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Hi Farish..excellent shot..nicely composed with nice details.

Roger

Hi Farish,

Excellent shot!!. The best I have seen in your works. good details. I somehow agree with kavin.

Salam Farish jon;

Great shot of your Baby, fantastic way of capturing his eyes...great angle, and frame, very good tonality on the skin.

Godbless both of them,
ramin

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  • datis Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 113 W: 4 N: 29] (640)
  • [2008-09-01 11:57]

Hi Farish,

Very nice view, Deep looking in his eyes. How old is this cute mooshi:)?

Regards,
Daryoosh

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  • manny Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 24 N: 1485] (11941)
  • [2009-03-22 7:06]

bice tight composition. very intimate feeling.

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