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You were the Sun


You were the Sun
Photo Information
Copyright: Mohammad E Hesamian (elihesamian) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 165 W: 5 N: 35] (671)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-10-14
Categories: Nature, Artwork
Camera: Canon 20D, EF 28-200 f/3.5-5.6 USM, UV O-Haze Filter
Exposure: f/13.0, 1/60 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Sunflowers [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-10-14 15:47
Viewed: 1042
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 28
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
...
Some day you came
And I knew you were the one
You were the rain,
You were the sun
But I needed both,
cause I needed you,
...

"Michael Cretu"
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To schapman: Real and simpleelihesamian 1 10-15 15:18
To malopes: Thanks,elihesamian 1 10-15 15:12
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Hello Mohammad... The vivid colours are great... Sharpness is also very well... Maybe the more black background could be used, however, I do like the details...

Can

Salam!
This photo has very beautiful colour with nice composion!
Khily zibast .mamnonam

I didn't even saw the name and i knew it was from you! how to you get this colours?fantastic my friend!
Mario

Dear Mohammad,
I have also to join Malopes and ask you: "how do you achieve these colours?" They are so vibrant, sharp, and the composition is truely beautiful. I never heard of the song, but your photo is a real work of art.
My compliments!

Shelly.

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4190 W: 222 N: 3834] (28091)
  • [2005-10-14 20:27]

Hi Mohammad

Superb graphism, of the brightly lit sunflowers, against the dark bg. The shallow dof, & sharpness, are outstanding. I like the bright, saturated yellow. Well done!

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  • Quark Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1669 W: 10 N: 29] (66)
  • [2005-10-15 4:12]

Like the sun is rising, this is really nice, also is the combination of yellow and b(l)ackground, nice light, nice photo, my friend !

I love black backgrounds. It helps the subject stand out. Yellow is fantastic and light work brilliant.

This is fantastic Mohammad! The lighting, colors, composition and image quality.. A+
Congratulations!
Skye

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  • letr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1352 W: 439 N: 1185] (6625)
  • [2005-10-23 8:34]

the yellow and black BG ...very original it makes the flowers stand out more , excellent compo too ..great work M !!

perfect tri-flowers (like trilogy).
I like this stylistic exercice you have done here.
Compliments
jeaanMichel

great comp and lighting, superb, (*_*)

HI MOHAMMAD,

SO SWEET NOTE .ALSO PIC GIVE THE IDEA . VERY WELL DONE. GREATINGS FROM ITALY
SEE YA
DENIS

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  • berek Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 729 W: 61 N: 30] (197)
  • [2006-01-24 9:59]

Hi Mohammad,
Beautiful framing and light control. have a nice day.
Burak
Meaning(Sense) :9
Framing:9
Idea :10

Hi Mohammad,
This is an excellent sunflower photograph! The backlighting combined with the dark background creates an awesome effect, the yellow colour is really standing out here... Vibrant! It is a fine composition, and I agree on the DOF...
Regards,
Pablo -

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