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ebrahim varmaziyar


ebrahim  varmaziyar
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Copyright: ebrahim varmaziyar (ev_ir) (54)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-03-26
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/120 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-12-08 5:33
Viewed: 430
Points: 2
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my free love
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  • Nathan Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 45 W: 32 N: 5] (1899)
  • [2005-12-08 5:53]
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To me a photo of a back yard with a dirty old pond....i can't seem to match the note with the image sorry. No point of difference...As photographers we should be looking for something that stands out, something that tells a story or something that makes us go 'WOW' . Remember 'point of difference', it sets you apart from other photographers.

A newspaper photographer once ripped shreads out of some amatuers for taking photos of ducks, they were good sharp photos but they were still ducks...ducks are every where for anyone to snap. Hope you understand.

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  • green Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 184 W: 90 N: 209] (2430)
  • [2005-12-08 7:05]

Not sure about what I'm looking at... or I'm not sure about what am I suppose to look at. What the theme, subject, reason of this picture? I'm at lost.
Sorry doesn't work for me.

OK - here's my recommendation; my suggestion.
Look through as many images a syou can that have been posted on this site. There will be some that are outstanding. There will be many that are ... substandard.
You will surely see the better ones, They will stand clear of the rest.
Read the comments. Perhaps they will emphasise why the images are better than average.
Look at your world - in Iran. Find that image that will attract us as a global audience. We don't REALLY want to see poverty, rubbish/garbage, ugliness - unless there is a point to it.
We all prefer to see beauty, creativity, colour (for the most part) and there must be something in Iran that would give us that. See my images from UAE. Perhaps that will nudge you in the right direction. Both Islamic countries and, while I have never been to Iran, I suspect that there are similarities that you can impress us with.
As it is, your title is rather suggestive of a suicide note.
Meanwhile, welcome to the harsh reality of Trek Lens.

Good shot with beautiful colours

Lucio

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