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Tal


Tal
Photo Information
Copyright: Alex Shainshein (s_a_s_h_a) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 294 W: 74 N: 417] (2958)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-08-18
Categories: Decisive Moment
Camera: Nikon D-80, Nikkor 50mm f/1.8D AF, Hama UV 0-Haze M55
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/60 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Final Version, Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): B&W photo [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-08-25 3:06
Viewed: 213
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My daughter Tal

Another one shot from home session, I think more better and more sharpness
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The light and the sharpness here is excellent Alex, but... usually I don't really like a portrait that's taken more or less from below the model.
Fact is you look straight up someone's nose, which I personaly think, is not a very flattering view.
Other than that, I really like the details, sharpness and light.
so...maybe you have some more to show???
looking forward to seeing them. She's really a lovely girl.

Cheers!
Anneke

Hi Alex,
Very beautiful B&W portrait vith nice pose.TFS.
Cheers,

hAyAti

Hola Alex

una bella sonrisa buen trabajo

Ciao Alex, beautiful and original B&W portrait of lovely girl with splendid smile, very well done, ciao Silvio

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1006 W: 81 N: 66] (12168)
  • [2009-08-29 17:20]

dear Alex,
realistic but rather dreaming expression is well captured in it.
in this her beautiful posture, we can imagine both the innocence and the desire.
young girl shows us strange atmosphere like this.
thank you for your excellent shot,
Akihisa

ciao Alex..
there is a good taste for the improvvisation in this capture..
as it was a stolen capture.. expression looks so natural with a quiet smiling.. in a certain way contagious..
good the choise of b&w.. the mood it's really helped in this way..
nice and original job, my compliments
ciao Marco

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  • przem Silver Star Critiquer [C: 48 W: 0 N: 2] (338)
  • [2009-09-22 10:48]

hi Alex,
beautiful portrait of the joyful figure, good tints of the greyness
regards
Przem

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