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Critiques [Translate]
- Niva
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1157 W: 2 N: 842]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-n-g.gif)
(10547) - [2007-05-13 6:13]
Hello Sergei,
What for a beautiful natural and sculptural image!A good idea and imagination!
Soft colors, but too bright... It doesn´t matter... Very nice, anyway!
TFS,
Greetings,
Nivaldo
- alitheniceguy
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 157 W: 54 N: 79]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-g-g.gif)
(422) - [2007-05-13 7:03]
Dear Sergi,
A good capture but always remember to tell your model to take of slippers in the water bcz its not required and also as its a dead sea on the right end of the picture there are two human beings and little cropping will help you remove them.
With best regards,
Muhammad Usman Ali
actually a good model-shot, sergei! :-)
but as muhammad mentioned some things could be done even better - maybe a tighter crop to
emphasize the nice model a little bit more and adjustment of colors and contrast.
good idea and nice job, thor.
ps: i would recommend keeping the shoes on in the dead sea as the stones and dried salt
are sharp and not very good for the feet -
taking them off for just the shooting would be the idea.
Good basic composition.
May I suggest a polarizing filter and a wider aperture for the next time?
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Nice, well composed shot Sergei. Please excuse me, I usually do not do workshops but your image kind of requested it. I really hope you don't mind.
Regards,
Tibi
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nice picure with a lot of potential
i think is was better to see the sea in the background
i like the colours and the position of that woman
i made a ws
tfsM
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- gil (90)
- [2007-05-19 4:19]
HELLO MY FRIEND
VERY NICE
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- rebel
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(1177) - [2007-07-05 10:31]
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Ola Sergei,
Beautiful composition and very good idea.
The colors are warm and seem to be natural.
Congratulations and TFS.
Sergio (Sergei in portuguese).
(*) I'll become tomorrow with a WS.
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Salt water? hmmm... but nice girl :)