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way2Ruhama
Photo Information
Copyright: David Barad (dbp) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 680 W: 9 N: 97] (4079)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-03-13
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Olympus C700 UZ
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/1000 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-06-05 14:25
Viewed: 772
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
If you'll go forward you'll find a small hill - the "lily sharon" grave.
David
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I would trim mountains, he subsumed the contrast lightly and he moved the whole in order to more in trick, cool place but not entirely used.

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  • tibig Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 657 W: 26 N: 681] (7565)
  • [2007-06-05 14:50]
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Hi David,
Nice wavy composition.
Regards,
Tibi

Hello David,
Wonderful feeling of space and movement ("waves" of the road). However, I think the wavy effect could still be stronger without the horizon. Colours could be more contrasted too. I did a WS to show you what I mean.
Anyway, I like it!
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

excellent pov and composition, david! :-)
the street with itīs waves embedded into the wonderful hilly landscape is amazing -
i guess it is fun to drive there.
well done & take care, thor.

hello DAvid! this is excellent shot of this road!! this road is great!TFS
greetings Aga

Helo David!!!
..what a interesting photo!!
..very good composition of this road!!
i like it!!
m..

hello David

you have got a great feeling of depth and a very nice perspective in your picture

regards

jjo

Hello david,
I'm always captivated by endless roads continuing into eternity..! Well...
This is interesting, also because of the tele compression, good lines in the composition and fine colours!
Greetings,
Pablo -

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