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The-Going-Down-Sun
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Copyright: Paul Weizmann (PaulSuomi) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 18 W: 0 N: 1] (113)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-08-16
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon EOS 50D, Canon EF-S 18-200mm F3.5-5.6 IS, SanDisk Ext. IV 8 GB, Hama UV 390 (O-haze) 72mm
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/320 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-09-08 12:52
Viewed: 103
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Here's a picture from my three-week-holiday in Israel. This shows a sunset taken from the Arad-Park. It really was an exiting moment.
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Sunsets are a popular subject on TL, and for good reason, it's a spectacular event.

I think stronger composition would improve this - try using rule of thirds, or placing the setting sun lower in the frame with more sky above it ...

Rew

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  • rychem Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 329 W: 3 N: 17] (7239)
  • [2009-09-08 23:10]

Hallo,
selten interessiere ich mich fuer Fotos mit Sonnenuntergang, das hier ist aber eine Abwechslung, ich meine die unterschiedlichen Schichten von Wolken und Landschaft, die sehr gut gezeigt wurden, gut beobachtet
Gruesse
Ryszard

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