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Green and brown


Green and brown
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Copyright: Yitzhak Avigur (Avigur) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 144 W: 49 N: 141] (747)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-01-24
Categories: Nature
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix F601 ZOOM
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/60 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-04-13 15:11
Viewed: 831
Points: 18
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I am really desperate..
Even when I try to capture a nature shot it ends up with patterns, geometry, high contrat. I don't know why, I can never have a sweet, simple, innocent shot..why.
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  • Great 
  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 976 W: 119 N: 58] (262)
  • [2004-04-13 15:19]

Well, i don't know Yitzhak. i think it is sweet and i think it is innocent. Then you have added your personal toucht to it but...my first thought was "this was different". But really, you should not be worried about patterns and contrast. You take good pictures and that's it. If your eyes like contrast and pattern, then give them contrast an patterns. I for one like it :)

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  • Jep Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 131 W: 16 N: 97] (585)
  • [2004-04-13 15:40]

Yes Yitzhak - I think we both got the TE "decease" ;-))

But never mind - I believe its a healthy one - it makes us look at the world with other eye's and see things which we otherwise would have overlooked.

Much of our technical inventions inspired of things found in nature - but of course you know that :-)

So just keep you the good work - no "cure" for that.

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  • Judy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 167 W: 94 N: 153] (529)
  • [2004-04-13 15:46]

I think this is great Yitzhak - perhaps you judge yourself too harshly? The leaves are starting to turn here with winter just around the corner, so we are seeing alot of this around. More simple you could not get...

:-D
I wouldn't worry too much - I would actually call this one a perfectly simple and innocent shot. The brown branch adds interest amidst the green ones, nothing wrong with that. Good shot.

You didn't crop enough? : ) I like this pattern, although the sharpness/clarity is a little too strong for me; the patterns blend too much as a result. A good simple detail, well captured.

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  • jhm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 260 W: 0 N: 93] (513)
  • [2004-04-14 2:38]

Hi Yitzhak, excellent title green and brown, nice and sharp, lovely picture.

Hmm...Yitzak, i think you are more capable than this. Did you use a flash for this. Looks harsh.
Take your time, don't be so desperate.

I like this photo Yitzhak, good colors and great DOF. The composition it's great, too.

Well done

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  • ilouy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 63 W: 18 N: 57] (760)
  • [2004-04-17 16:38]

Interesting for the color change of one part of the >leaf

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