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Abandoned


Abandoned
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Copyright: Tsilla Nahari (tnahari) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 760 W: 115 N: 1749] (10302)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-05-20
Categories: Architecture
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/1250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): windows & doors [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-05-24 5:56
Viewed: 130
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
abandoned building in southern Tel Aviv near Jaffa (Yaffo)
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It's a great shot, Tsilla!
Excellent textures, nice function frame of the FP wall. Marvelous contrast. Great oldie!
Bom domingo,
Raimundo

Hi Tsilla
What an interesting capture and old building
Great perspective
Have a nice weekend
Burak

Tsilla,
I like the great depth that this photo has. The blue sky is well captured, a feat many people fail to achieve. I like the details in this although it's possible you were on the edge of over-sharpening this. Nevertheless, this is a pretty good photo that should do well here on TrekLens.
Scott

Well seen Tsilla - well composed and the exposure is spot on I think both for the highlights and shadows..

Nice work
David

  • Great 
  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3312 W: 788 N: 4424] (19918)
  • [2009-05-24 20:18]

Hi Tsilla,
Very good photo! The composition has a nice depth with this open window on the sky. Strong visual impact!
I like the beautiful colored harmony with the natural blue, and the luminous ochre on the walls. Excellent textures on the crumbled stuc. This is an alive way to present this abandonned building.
My compliments! Annie

Hello Tsilla! Wonderful abandoned window, mysterious view. Good sharp and focus. Original capture and frame. Good luck!

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