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• ErikSven (2299)
• [2009-06-10 7:24]

Hello,
There are things I like in this photo, but also things I have my doubts about.
- What I like:
The mood (being/feeling lonely in a crowded city), appropriately rendered by the colour treatment (many brown tones and dark contrasts), as well as by the grain, the rather soft focus and the "empty space" above the girl.
- My doubts:
The centered composition (though I am not systematically "devoted" to the compositional rule of thirds, I feel there should be more space on the left of the girl) and the impression that the photo is tilted and/or suffers from lens distorsion (two flaws that can be corrected).
Of course, this is just my personal opinion. Feel free to (dis)agree ;o)
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

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• caverlyen (71)
• [2009-06-10 7:40]

Your pictures inspire me to want to go to Israel. I really enjoy your photographs I almost have to disagree with Erik a bit but I do it respectfully, I like the subject in the center cause honestly I like how she is in a work pose and there are things to the left and right of her that make the photo fun. As always the good ones spark emotion. I believe this one has. Thanks again for sharing.

Eric

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• balongcute (101)
• [2009-06-11 13:45]
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