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Copyright: Yitzhak Avigur (Avigur) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 144 W: 49 N: 141] (747)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-02-24
Categories: Transportation
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix F601 ZOOM
Exposure: f/4, 1/400 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-04-16 9:35
Viewed: 1161
Points: 13
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This shot could be a part of my Firemen in action


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A diferent view of your series "Firemen in action", Yitzhak.

I like it, good colors and details.

Well done

A very clear shot of the tools of the trade, i can't imagine they use a spade very often but they are prepared it seems. Its an interesting detail but i feel you could have livened it up with some pp, strong contrast, desaturation? Good shot.

  • Great 
  • manny Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 24 N: 1485] (11941)
  • [2004-04-16 12:57]

Interesting shot. The background though is a bit distracting.

  • Great 
  • Orme Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 87 W: 6 N: 73] (311)
  • [2004-04-16 13:35]

An interesting array of tools, Yitzhak. Good detail and I like the touches of red. Well seen.

  • Great 
  • Jep Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 131 W: 16 N: 97] (585)
  • [2004-04-16 17:18]

Nice to see the order of these important tools - they clearly used a lot - nice work indeed Yitzhak - the sunlight gives nice light/shadows.

  • Good 
  • ilouy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 63 W: 18 N: 57] (760)
  • [2004-04-17 12:22]

The subject is interesting and has a big potential for creating many differents creatives pictures. The distance from the subject and the angle of view here is, IMHO, not the strongest you could have chosen. The perspective distortion is visible on the top and lower corner on the right side of the picture and these are not really nice in the composition. I think a direct frontal view would have been better. This picture is for me "weak" compared to your usual work. Outside these considerations, I like the combination of the metallic background pattern with the wood parts of the tools and also the red color on it.

  • Great 
  • Didi Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 51 W: 27 N: 37] (207)
  • [2004-04-18 12:08]

Vous êtes très bien outillé pour les besoins d'urgences.
La composition est parfaite et parfaitement ordonnée.

You are very well equipped for the emergency needs. The composition is perfect and ordered perfectly.

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