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In the street


In the street
Photo Information
Copyright: Elena Zapassky (lenazap) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 225 W: 22 N: 13] (1936)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-02
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-02-29 1:24
Viewed: 345
Points: 14
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Hi Elena. Very nice photo of everyday life in Jaffa. However i would have cropped the hand in the right side away. It takes focus away from the main-person. It will also make the guy less centered in the picture - like he is walking into the picture.

Hello Elena! Interesting scene. Daily life. Very good POV. Original dynamic shot. Shalom!

Beautiful and great. The feeling is there.

Have a good WE Elena

My regards

teresat

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  • mbrito Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1638 W: 118 N: 2823] (11388)
  • [2008-02-29 6:40]

Hello Elena,
Fantastic captre; in the contrats in the light; in the compo. Bravo.
Regards, jmb

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1046 W: 81 N: 66] (12583)
  • [2008-02-29 9:03]

white shirt and black windbreaker suggest something dissociation in his mind...or two layers in his spirit.
he seems to me wanting to take a defiant attitude to his world. but it maybe real situation now and there.
you surely succeed to capture the air in the street.
thank you,
Akihisa

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  • tibig Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 657 W: 26 N: 681] (7565)
  • [2008-02-29 23:11]

Very good BW treatment, I like your capture of this urbane cowboy.
Regards,
Tibi

Good morning Lena,
good moment, excellent details,
very nice image..
TFS

Igor

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