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Critiques [Translate]
- paulw
![Silver Star Critiquer [C: 25 W: 3 N: 5]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/s-n-n.gif)
(64) - [2005-10-07 8:05]
Nice photo. I like the way your eye is drawn to the girl reading. Good colour and composition.
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- jcandeli
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 853 W: 100 N: 348]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-g-g.gif)
(3985) - [2005-10-07 10:07]
very good composition! I love the angle of the bookshelf. Nice diagonals created by the books and yellow line on the floor. Great job. JP
![Gold Star Critiquer [C: 64 W: 1 N: 5]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-n-n.gif){kind=small}
I agree.
How about cropping out everything to the right of the girl? It might create an even stronger image.
Steve
- pablominto
(27446)
- [2005-10-08 8:30]
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Hi Michal,
I like the lines here, creating a very nice perspective! Good even lighting, but also enhancing her silhouette and giving a nice shadow...
Regards,
Pablo -