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Copyright: bulent erol (afoni) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 34 W: 0 N: 0] (1699)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-10-16
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/30 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): UrFaust's favorite portraits [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-10-27 1:49
Viewed: 177
Points: 24
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hi Bulent,
gorgeous looking portrait of a beautiful lady. wonderful soft lighting..the colour harmony..all fit so well. i like the soft focus on her face, looks like an oil painting. thanks for sharing take care.

regards,
Mayur

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3274 W: 268 N: 7772] (33174)
  • [2009-10-27 2:31]

Hello Bulent
What an attractive young lady your model is. And you show her so well. Well captured portrait. The lighting is good and I do like your soft focus.
Well done
Janice

Hello Bulent
Beautiful model here, loved her eyes and eye contact!
Fantastic!

I like how she engages my eyes and do not let distract.
Composition is impressive. Since u've not provided any photographer's note, i can not figure out why u intend to give a color cast to this one???
It can be a very beautiful B&W, Sepia and colored itself, isn't it?

I've just posted my opinion in the workshop, I hope this will nether offend ur pretty model nor u :)

TFS
Cheers
JZM

ciao Bulent..
a magnetic sight indeed.. intense and really beautiful..
I'm enchanted by the beauty of this woman..
your capture is able to exalt it in an incredible way..
in theory your pov is not really perfect.. maybe you should be turned a little bit more.. to obtain the less possible shadow effect on her nose.. however.. i dont know if you should lost something of her magic charme taken here..
for me an excellent job!
thanks
ciao Marco

Hello, Bulent -
Captivating image - she is strikingly beautiful with luminous eyes and perfectly smooth skin. The subtle colors compliment her own coloring. Perfect balance of light and shadows. Exceptional portrait.

Excellent... belle éclairage

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1509 W: 23 N: 0] (11866)
  • [2009-10-27 4:29]

Hi Bulent...
Beautiful portrait...
Beautiful soft lighting...
Regards...
Andro

Hi Bulent,

Lovely photograph of this beautiful girl,their just seems to be a slight warm colour cast,she has gorgeous eyes.

Douglas

hI Bulent..nice shot..pretty model well posed. The shot is also well composed..nice work.

Roger

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  • A-lex Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 132 W: 54 N: 255] (2142)
  • [2009-10-27 10:07]

Hi Bulent,

Not many people can shout good portrait photo's. Most of the time the light is wrong or there's to much been done on the photo. This one is very good. The light on the right places. Never overexposed. Warm shot!

Great work,

Alex

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  • mark25 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 363 W: 9 N: 745] (4630)
  • [2009-10-27 11:05]

screw the color cast, i love this photo!

the girl is beautiful and the warm light just adds to the whole mood and feel :) this could easily be a film poster or a music cd cover!!

one of the most interesting and impressive photos on TL :)

muhammad muhsin

Hello Bulent,

very interesting portrait of a beautiful person.
However I think that the warm cast is too strong and the lighting in her face could be more balanced. I did a workshop to show how I'd like to see her.

Regards,
Attila

Hello

Bueatiful portrait, really attractive look

TFS

Olivier

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