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meryem
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Copyright: Mustafa YAPICI (milas) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2743 W: 412 N: 2987] (32975)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-11-02
Categories: Friends/Family
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-11-02 0:52
Viewed: 129
Points: 37
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Meryem yeleğini giyerken yaptığım hazırlıksız bir çekim...
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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To schumacher: milasmilas 1 11-05 08:06
To hay_kes: meryemmilas 1 11-02 13:47
To rewshearer: merhabamilas 1 11-02 13:46
To gunershot: meryemmilas 1 11-02 07:53
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Merhaba Mustafa amca
Hazırlıksız da olsa güzel yakalamışsınız
Netlik, ışık ve sunum harika
Elinize sağlık
Burak

Hi Mustafa,
Nice portrait, the details look very clear. The lighting on one side of her face looks a bit brighter than the other side, maybe the fill flash would have come in handy to create a more balanced exposure, but the composition looks great here. Good job with the DoF too.

TFS,
Scott.

Beautiful portrait of this girl with a great innocent expressions, Mustafa!
The sharpness and POV are nice. Great play with light.

Very well done.

best wishes,
Paras

Selam Mustafa Bey,
Özlemişiz Meryemi. Artık okullu olduk sayılır. Bu poz gerçekten harika olmuş. Bakışı etkileyici.
Gözlerinden öpüyoruz tatlı kızımızı..
Selahattin E

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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1283 W: 47 N: 2927] (16846)
  • [2009-11-02 4:00]

Merhaba Mustafa:)
Very nice portrait of Meryem - light on left a bit to bright but entire picture is so nice.
Selamlar - Tom:)

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1363 W: 0 N: 2686] (21341)
  • [2009-11-02 4:15]

Hello,

Elle grandit bien, suepr de nous poster ces merveilleux portrait, très bele psoition et cadrage, mangigique image.

Bravo et maitié

Nicou

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1512 W: 23 N: 0] (11884)
  • [2009-11-02 5:30]

Merhaba Mustafa...
Nice portrait with so nice composition...
Regards...
Andro

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1724 W: 127 N: 1483] (20890)
  • [2009-11-02 5:43]

Merhaba Mustafa bey,
Küçük prensesimizi ne çok özlemişim..Kaşı,gözü giderek size benziyor mu ne..Gerçi eşinizi hiç görmedik ama...Pembe,örgülü saçlar çok yakışmış.Hoş güzele ne yakışmaz.Siz de hazırlıksızda olsa iyi görüntülemişsiniz.Ellerinizs sağlık.Meryem'i güzel gözlerinden öpüyorum.Selamlar..Necla.

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4269 W: 414 N: 6836] (42744)
  • [2009-11-02 7:14]

Hi Mustafa

A superb low shooting angle, with excellent colour and framing, but the image is a little soft overall. Good shadow detail & graphism of the dark pigtails. Tfs!

Merhaba Mustafa,
Uykudan uyanmış mahmur güzel gözler
Babacığı bütün gün onun yolunu gözler
Yok dünyada böyle bir güzel inanın..
Beyhude arayışlar olsada yok böyle gözler

Selam,sevgiler
Dr.seyfettin Güner

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2660 W: 74 N: 4764] (21701)
  • [2009-11-02 8:21]

Hi Mustafa...

Beautiful portrait of cute Meryem...
Excellently done - nice details and colors.
With my compliment,
George

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  • Saba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 620 W: 0 N: 1693] (9506)
  • [2009-11-02 8:32]

Merhaba Mustafa.

Pretty Meryem, very pretty her portrait

I greet.
Barbara

Merhaba Mustafa Bey,
Meryem'i özlemiştik.Çok doğal bir pozlama olmuş.Beğeneceğini umarak bir WS yaptım.Umarım Meryem'de beğenir.Eline sağlık.
Selamlarımla..

hAyAti

Cute shot but I think your shutter speed was too slow for this, there seems to be motion blur on her eyes.

Sorry for not being as positive as your friends, I'm only trying to offer an honest and hopefully helpful critique!

Rew

Olá Mustafa

Lindo retrato...linda garotinha
de tranças, de olhar ingenuo e
um narizinho perfeito...meus
parabéns pelo trabalho.
GA
Vera

Really nice to see meryem growing up into a fine young lady Nice portrait TFS
warm regards
David

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  • jone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2284 W: 180 N: 0] (29430)
  • [2009-11-03 1:32]

Merhaba my DEAR FRIEND ;)))
Nice portrait of a little beautiful lady ;)))
Best wishes...
J ;)

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5766 W: 198 N: 2587] (10150)
  • [2009-11-04 6:07]

Ciao Mustafa


I missed One!
This beautiful Meryem
a beautiful portrait of very good taste!
Sharpness and clarity are superb.
Congratulations my friend ...

Sergio

Selam Meryem :))

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