Daisy

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• timisyra (31)
• [2006-05-04 13:59]
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Bonjour Acar,
tes couleurs sont tres genereuse, la nettete et le cadrage tres bon. Belle fleurs.
Par contre j'aurais legerement augmenté la luminosité, l'intensité et le contraste, afin de faire resortir le blanc des pétales.
TFS
sylvie

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• ben-u-ron (4043)
• [2006-05-04 14:29]
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I think this photo has potential...I've made a ws...hope you like.

cheers,
Carla

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• andtine (1093)
• [2006-05-04 14:38]
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This is a very good and detailed shot of a daisy head, I like the way it stands out in contrast against the background. however I feel the colours are a little muted and would be better if the daisy was a brighter white. I also feel the daisy would be better emphasised with a shallower DoF. I did a workshop to show my interpretation of your great shot.

Andrew

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• yas_ank (0)
• [2006-05-04 16:43]
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Merhaba Acar.
Guzel bir yakin plan cekim calismasi olmus, tebrikler.
Papatyanin yarisi gayet iyi isik almis ama diger yarisi biraz daha az ama fotografinizin guzelligini zedelememis bana gore.
Fondaki mavi renkli ve minicik cicekler o kadar guzel ki, bayiliyorum o ciceklere; ki o cicekler kompozisyonunuza guc katmis bence.
Renkler, netlik ve alan derinligi oldukca basarili olmus diyebilirim.
Guzel paylasiminiz icin tesekkurler.
En iyi dileklerimle, isiginiz bol olsun.

Yasin.

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• sbilgi (4804)
• [2006-05-04 16:58]

Mrh.
Güzel bir makro çalışması.Güzel DOF.WS'larda da görüleceği gibi üzerinde çalışılabilir.
Kadraj değişebilir.
Selamlar,
Şeref

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• jmp1 (483)
• [2006-05-04 18:46]

Hi Acar,
Great color, sharpness and details. The flower is beautiful and the background excelent. The blue blur flower seem sapphire!
Best regards,
José M.

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• cqueror (0)
• [2006-05-05 2:53]

Merhaba
Çok net ve güzel bir makro yanındaki mavi çiçeklerde nazar boncuğu gibi duruyor :) aman nazar değmesin :) güzel bir çalışma tebrikler..

Fatih

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• emanetkerem (4918)
• [2006-05-05 5:29]

Merhaba Acar
Harika çalışma. Mükemmel bir çiçek. Yaprakları harika görünüyor. Ortasındaki renkde öyle. Ayrıca üzerine düşen gölge sanki amazonlardaki havayı katmış :) Güzel paylaşım .

Kerem

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• gaylen54 (0)
• [2006-05-05 23:27]

This daisy seems shy, half-hiding in the shadows. :) The colors and light are very nice! The compo might be better if you moved the daisy out of the center, though. Excellent clarity and light!
Gayle :)

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• ceslou (4167)
• [2006-05-07 1:28]

beautiful colors. although its spot centered but the whole thing is pleasing to the eyes. thanks for sharing.

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• harpya (48)
• [2006-05-07 11:35]

Hi Acar,

A wonderful look,
I adored the picture, the details
this founds, great composition
the flower is very sharp, beautiful!
Congratulations

Sérgio

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• chrisJ (28231)
• [2006-05-09 2:23]

Hi Acar

A wonderful shot of the daisy. Superb sharpness, color, & dof. I like the blue flowers either side. Well done!

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• suzley (6792)
• [2006-05-12 3:48]

Hello Acar.

Thankyou for the intro to your work.

You have some amazing picture already, this one caught my eye straight away...the subtle touch of shade on part of the flower adds so much to the overall effect....slightly secret, slightly mystical.......i do like this one very much, you must be pleased with this, A big welldone indeed.

Stv.

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• deep_blue (1670)
• [2006-05-14 4:57]
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Selamlar Acar
Çok çok güzel bir yakın çekim çalışması..papatyaları çok severim..
Eline sağlık
Deniz

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• katya534 (5538)
• [2006-06-14 22:18]

Pretty and shy daisy. I really like the light in this shot; it could have worked if you were to crop it tightly around the flower with a big white frame around it.

Katya

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• mrcrow (2712)
• [2006-10-13 14:52]

subdued lighting here adds mood...or is the mood of the shot..quiet and beautiful with a few colourful friends in the area of green to fill out the frame..
would you consider a frame being an asset to these shots...sometimes one does tend to enclose and enhance the subject a bit more
cheers
geof

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• Refugee (25502)
• [2006-10-17 14:25]

Lovely photo Acar. Delightful semi light and the colour of the daisy set nicely against the background. The vivid blues of the other flowers make a nice arrangement. TFS,
David
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• anavazao (3782)
• [2006-10-27 19:47]

Hi friend,
successful macro , with of impressive colors! Very good details, light, perpective, POV...
Take care Ana:)