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Copyright: MihribanFuat YILMAZ (fuaty) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 225 W: 254 N: 42] (386)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-12-27
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/2.8
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): mes préférées [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-12-27 16:01
Viewed: 862
Points: 80
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Oda

Gün günden odamın şeklini alıyorum
İşliyorum bu iniltili varlığı yeniden
Kim bilir, duyuyorum yazgısını belki de
Kuru bir dal parçasını içinden yiye yiye
Dal olan bir böceğin
O garip yazgısını

Ne ölüme benzer ne ölümsüzlüğe.

Edip Cansever

moli, fatihsurmaz, denizler, bilgekurt, broadcaster, kayra, INCIMINA, metem, nadine432, cunejo200, inaam, HaBeMa, doganizler, mesquens1 has marked this note useful
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To moli: Thanks...fuaty 1 02-17 15:47
To amine_irmani: 8:)fuaty 1 01-23 15:21
To ablok: ??fuaty 1 01-21 14:52
To btokaz: Thank you 8:)fuaty 1 01-21 13:42
To doganizler: Tesekkur ederiz...fuaty 1 01-21 13:41
To sjofre: Thanks..fuaty 1 01-21 13:36
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To mrcrow: Thanksfuaty 1 01-12 12:34
To TasmaniaC: Tesekkurlerfuaty 1 01-10 14:56
To Bogdan011: 8:)fuaty 1 01-05 17:07
To Suha_Ataoguz: Tesekkurler..fuaty 1 01-05 09:38
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To inaam: Thanksfuaty 1 01-03 15:53
To gabbypal: Hi JAnosfuaty 1 01-03 15:34
To HaBeMa: Tesekkurler...fuaty 1 01-03 15:23
To orkhan: 8:)fuaty 2 01-01 12:16
To silycat: Thanks...fuaty 1 12-30 11:20
To cunejo200: 8:)fuaty 1 12-30 11:18
To metem: TEsekkur ederiz...fuaty 1 12-29 16:57
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To denizler: 8:)fuaty 1 12-28 16:17
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Critiques [Translate]

Merhaba Mihri & Fuat :)
Harika bir kompozisyon
renkler netlik ve güneş ışığının yatağa düşüşü harika
çalışmaya verdiğiniz isimde tamamlamış
eline gözüne sağlık

FaTiH

Hi,
A very nice mood has been captured, nice contrasted colours, the light through the window is beautiful !
Well done.
Sylvie
ps : a pity I don't understand the note.

Hello,
This is beautiful. I really like this composition, POV, lightning, contrast and DOF. This is very well done. Thanks,
Claudine

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2816 W: 363 N: 2725] (11788)
  • [2006-12-27 16:32]
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I love the balance you found between the light out- and inside. The shades create a nice pattern on the bedsheet. Maybe your title is a tad too bright for the rest of the shot. Anyway, I like it a lot. Well done, TFS

Selamlar MihribanFuat:)
Nekadar güzel sıcak bir çalışma!Renkler ve komposizyon çok güzel.Ellerinize sağlık.Tebrikler,
İyi Geceler,
Deniz.

Sevgili Mihri;
Bu sıcacık sığınağı bizlerle paylaştığın için teşekkürler.
Örtünün tatlı düzensizliği ve üzerindeki katlanmış giysi ne güzel bir duygu vermiş; Yaşam. Evet dış dünyada her haliyle yaşam olduğu belli, ancak mekanda yaşamı bu sürpriz belirtilerle vermek yaratıcı. Doku üzerindeki gölgelere, petek dilimleri üzerindeki yansımalara bayıladım. Grafiksel, aynı zamanda yaşam belirtileri var. Onlarca hikaye yazabileceğimiz ilgi merkezleri mevcut, ancak bu sefer yazmayacağım;)
Fotografik değeri yüksek bir çalışma, kutluyorum.
Ellerine, yüreğine sağlık.
Hoş kal, hoşlarla kal.

ergUn'caNdd

Merhaba Mihriban&Fuat :O)
Işık kullanımı ve kadrajdaki yerleşim çok başarılı (+) usta işi olmuş.
Gölgeler ve karanlık kalan kısımlar kompozisyonu kuvvetlendirmiş, elerinize ve yüreğinize sağlık.
Paylaştığınız için teşekkürler, sevgi ve selamlar.

Yasin.

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  • gnc Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 755 W: 10 N: 106] (1500)
  • [2006-12-27 23:03]
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Moody composition and shadow light interplay, but it looks somehow like suunset to me. Anyway, great shot!

rgds,
Cristian

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  • kayra Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 386 W: 37 N: 112] (3117)
  • [2006-12-28 3:50]
  • [+]

Nefis bir fotograf, kutlarim :)

Mutlu Yillar

Hulya

çok başarılı, çok lezzetli bir kompozisyon.
panjurdan süzülen gün ışığı ve gölge alanları mükemmel karelemişsiniz. Ah bir de kalorifer petekleri olmasaymış:))
Şiirle birleşen harikulade bir sunum, ellerinize sağlık.

simple image du quotidien... mais superbe !
Belle composition !
Marie

hello,

Special mood in this picture, i like it very much.
greetings, inn

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  • metem Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1307 W: 39 N: 238] (2104)
  • [2006-12-28 17:34]
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başarılı bir ışık kullanımı , güzel bir çalışma
tebrikler.

Very nicely composed 'mood' picture, great colors, POV.
Cheers
Otto

bonjour
elle est étrange cette photo
elle me fait penser à un film à suspens
magnifique jeux d'ombre
très réussis
Nad

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2238 W: 385 N: 2370] (25732)
  • [2006-12-29 8:19]

MERHABA MİHRİBAN;
Güzel bir mekan, güzel bir çekim..tebrikler selamlar

Merhaba Mihri & Fuat,
Lovely lighting, colors, and atmosphere on this image. I would also like to wake up in the morning with the view on the window. Well presented. TFS and Happy New Year. Danilo

Hi Mihri!
Very cosy and warm view, I like the motive and composition, very unusuall!

Well composed picture with this lovely kind of light.
Unfortunately, I don't understand Turkish, but I imagine it's difficult to translate a poem :-)

Eid Mubarak and Happy New Year
orkhan

ambiance tamisée...lumière douce et paysage apaisant..bravo
Amicalement
Audrey

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1719 W: 5 N: 389] (1376)
  • [2007-01-02 14:09]
  • [+]

Merhaba Yilmaz and Welcome to 2007!

Angular light is well taken in this frame which is warming up the atmosphere from blanket. Surrounding darkness is giving this image a mytic touch. Nice taken my friend.

Thanks for sharing it.

Hello Mihriban, well I guess you are cleaning up with this one. Great camerawork and original idea. Ciao, Janos

Selam MihribanFuat;Oda manzarasi cok guzel,bu odada uyumak ve uyanmak ne kadar guzeldir kimbilir,siir ayri bir tat katmis,cok begendim,elinize saglik...
Habema.
:-]

Kompozisyon ve ışık kullanımı çok başarılı,
elektrikli radyatörü çekebilirmişsiniz ama böyle de güzel. Ellerinize sağlık, tebrikler.

Hi,
This looks almost like a painting. Good lighting.

The only thing I don`t like is the good morning thing - it reduces the tranquility effect.

Thanks for sharing,
Bogdan

Battaniyedeki renk, kaloriferin varlığı sıcacık bir kare yaratmış. Adım atılınca ulaşılabilecek kumsal ve sudaki devinim harika görünüyor, tebrikler

aK

Beautiful mood and lighting. I like that you can see both the room and the outdoors well in what looks like difficult lighting to shoot in.

TFS,
David

photography=light
you have used that well
full of mood and directional quality lighting giving a great image
cheers
geof

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  • Alba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 577 W: 0 N: 207] (2762)
  • [2007-01-13 12:25]
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Hi Mihriban
Wonderful colours, composition and lines (heater, store,shadows on the bed). That's a very moody picture like in a film, I'm eager to see characters appear...
Mary

Great shot! Fantastic light and colors. Moody....
Tomasz

güzel bir çalışma olmuş ellerinize sağlık

wonderful. Nice shadow and contrast, POV, DOF, and basicaly everything.

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  • ablok Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 186 W: 81 N: 158] (3699)
  • [2007-01-20 5:52]
  • [+]

Salut fuaty!
Une ambiance parfaitement maitrisé!
Et si on allai se baigner?? :)
Au plaisir!

joli photo idee magnifique


irmani

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1186 W: 285 N: 1315] (7065)
  • [2007-02-17 5:20]
  • [+]

Hi Fuaty.
Great and mistic capture.
Looks very impressive to me.
Great one I can say.
Best Regards and Thanks!
J-23

will be back with :)

Interesting picture, I like the colors:)

TFS!

Justyna

wow!
wonderful room and lighting
and what a view!

A well composed picture, Yilmaz. Also great atmosphere
and beautiful colors. Excellent done job, my friend.
Congratulations and thanks for sharing!

Brazilian greetings,
Bruno

Fantastica luz ,encuadre y composición...saludos

Merhaba MihribanFuat,
Excellent capture, nice soft colors and good details. Fantastic lighting.
TFS
Raimundo

You are really lucky to have such a view... It certainly makes a morning -good morning...
I really like your presentation, the use of light and the feeling of your shot. It is a bit moody and overall beautiful
Thank you for sharing
Kind regards
Elena

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