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Copyright: Burak Oktenli (burak28) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1244 W: 91 N: 1312] (16284)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-06-06
Categories: Nature
Camera: Sony Cybershot DSC-S730
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Macro Ambience, why backslapping is wrong [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2009-10-12 21:49
Viewed: 195
Points: 35
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There is no note, the image isn't sharp, it looks a bit too "busy" with not enough blur on many of the leaves, there are areas of overexposure and it looks like a skinny red phallus with a funny growth on the end.

Hi Burak,
A very angular capture of this red hibiscus.The textures of petals are looking amazing.BG is bit too crowded i think some PP work could have made this more powerful yet perhaps you wanted to keep the BG intact so its nothing bad IMO.TFS

l'ibisco rosso è molto bello
non perdere tempo a capire certi commenti
la sovraesposizione non la vedo ma c'è un gran gioco di luci ed ombre
Bravo
Anda

Helo Burak
So beautiful RED flower
Thanks for sharing
Bratislav

Hello Burak! Fantastic flower. Very interesting macro. Perfect contrast and sharpness. Well done!

Hi Burak,
A nice POV to capture this Hibiscus flower!
We can admire the heart of this beautiful flower easily!
Great sharpness with a good use of shallow DOF!
Lighting is subtle!
Nicely framed!
Best regards,

Francis Xavier

Merhaba dostum Burak!
What a beautiful flower,with amazing red!
perfect lighting,clarity and sharp details!
Regards and tfs
Kostas

hello Burak
hope you are doing fine
good dof and light


regards
Manuj MEhta

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4256 W: 414 N: 6770] (42500)
  • [2009-10-13 4:37]

Hi Burak

A superb capture of the colourful red hibiscus flower, with good sharpness, framing & shallow dof. A well managed exposure, with no appreciable oe. Tfs!

Hello Burak,
The red hibiscus has the most intricate design on its throat. The centarl composition works, there is reasonable sharpness. Best regards.
Danilo

Hi Burak,,
Nice caught of view and details,
Nice colors and light..
beautiful red flowers and contrast..
I made a Workshot. wish you like it.
Michel

Selam Burak,
Kırmızı yeşil ve sarının uyumlu birlikteliği.
Arka planı fotoşopla biraz flulaştırmak daha iyi olabilir. Ellerine sağlık, gözlerinden öperim
Selahattin E

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1324 W: 0 N: 2619] (21013)
  • [2009-10-13 9:07]

Hello,

fantastique vue de cette fleur, avec un long pistil avec les bouts jaunes, merveilleuse iamge et macro.

Bravoe t amitié

Nicou

Merhaba Burak,
Kırmızı serisine güzel bir halka eklemişsin.Tebrikler,

hAyAti

Merhaba Burak,
Çin gülünden nefis bir makro çıkarmışsın.
Eline sağlık. iyi günler.
Bayram

Hello Burak
after going through the comments I saw the camera model u have used to capture the shot and also read the review of this model.I am really surprised when I come to know that it is a ordinary compact camera.U have made a wonderfulful shot inspite of the limitations of ur camera.I really congratulate u.I know how difficult to blur the bg with a compact cam.so don't worry.be brave and face the world.
regards
kajari

Hello Burak,
Magnificent macro shot!
Perfect sharpness. Lovely colors, light and nicely blurred background.
An interesting POV.
Well done!
TFS

Olá Burak

Lindo hibisco vermelho muito
bem capturado. Detalhes bem
bonitos assim como as cores.
Ótimo enquadramento.
Parabéns
GA
Vera

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  • vanda Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 251 W: 0 N: 261] (1756)
  • [2009-10-15 13:06]

Merhaba Burak!
Another splendid shot of ibiscus.
Excellent POV. Lovely lighting and great details.
Well done.
Ciao! Vanda

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