Night & Colors

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• atha2pan (1011)
• [2009-10-14 9:31]
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Burak, the idea is nice and the chosen motives definitely worth to be shown,
Technically they are weak, you should try to avoid overexposed areas.

Take care
S

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• atomas59 (2336)
• [2009-10-14 10:01]
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Personnaly, I'm not a fan of those type of presentation. Hard to give a critique of 4 pictures at the same time.

So here it goes:

1-Photo at the top left.
Highlights are "hot" or over exposed.
Althought the red color is nice, there is not much appeal to this shot. The bottom crop is cutting most a people which I believe should have been include more into that picture, giving it, extra dynamic.

2-Photo at the top right.
Same problem as one. Overexposure.
This has macro quality, but then again, I can identify the real focal point of this image. Using a wider focal lenght, would had probably help.

3-bottom left image.
Once again, highlight are "hot". I wonder why you've included the left part of the image, which doesn't add anything to the actual shot.
I would have turn more toward the store, and try to isolate a bit more, to give it a sense of being the focal point of the image.

4-bottom right image.
Definitly, the most accurate exposed one of the four. Althought hard to see the relationship, between the hands sculpture and the building in the background. Looks to me like 2 shots in one.

Overall work, ain't really that good, fair at the most. It does lack content and don't do much to strick my interest. But then again only my personnal view of the matter.