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butterfly vs bee


butterfly vs bee
Photo Information
Copyright: Burak Oktenli (burak28) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1226 W: 91 N: 1269] (16025)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-09-16
Categories: Macro
Camera: Sony DSC-H50
Exposure: f/3.2, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-10-23 13:03
Viewed: 138
Points: 34
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Merhaba Burak,
Nefis ve ilginç bir makro çalışma.Detaylar ve arı portresi şahane.Tebrikler,

hAyAti

well spotted and captured my friend nicecolours and details
bryan

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  • Niva Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1146 W: 2 N: 838] (10395)
  • [2009-10-23 14:27]

Hello Burak
That´s a good flagrante, nice capture!
Well done, my friend.
Tesekkür ederim ,
kind regards,
Nivaldo

Hi Burak,
Nice presentation of a butterfly vs. Bee,
good sharpness and composition,
Excellent POV. and DOF.with great colors and light.
very well done.
Have a good weekend..
Michel

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  • akg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 163 W: 0 N: 83] (962)
  • [2009-10-23 18:31]

Hello Burak,
Nice macro. Excellent capture of them together.
TFS, abhijit.

Seam Burak,
Galiba bu bir Kelebek Çalısı Bitkisi. Güzel bir görüntü oluşturmuşlar. Ellerine sağlık
Selahattin E

Hi Burak,
A good macro depicting a conflict between a butterfly and a bee, which one is to collect more nectar from this violet flower.
Good timing to capture this beautiful image!
Impeccable sharpness and good details from an adequate POV.
DOF is ample and focusing is just right!
Good job.
Regards,

Francis Xavier

Bonjour Burak.
Dommage que le papillon a les ailes fermé nais l’abeille compense ce petit défaut.
L’image garde quant-même tout son intérêt et mérite la note.
Bonne journée.
Urs

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4214 W: 414 N: 6600] (41877)
  • [2009-10-24 5:13]

Merhaba Burak

Two for the price of one here! Good dof & sharpness although a tighter crop might work well here. Superb colour & contrasted light. Tfs!

Hello Burak,
I recognize the difficulty of taking macro shots of fast moving insects. The butterfly and bee, I assume, provided double excitement when you captured this. The butterfly bush provided good colors, and the insects are well placed in the frame. A faster shutter speed may help freeze movement. Have a good weekend.
Danilo

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1299 W: 2 N: 202] (15582)
  • [2009-10-24 7:07]

a beautiful chance which two insecten on a flower

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  • Saba Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 538 W: 0 N: 1481] (8783)
  • [2009-10-24 10:33]

Merhaba Burak :)

Beautiful and tasty surely, since such overworked bee :)
Original formulation, pretty colours.

I greet warmly.
Barbara

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1679 W: 124 N: 1437] (20206)
  • [2009-10-24 10:58]

Merhaba Burak'cım,
ikisini aynı anda ne güzel yakalamışsın.Tebrikler küçük prensim.İyi hafta sonları.Necla.

Merhaba Burak, hoş bir anı yakalamışsın.
Bir çiçekte 2 güzel:)
Eline sağlık.

Bayram

Salam Burak

Nice macro with natural colors
Amazing title you've choosed here
Perhaps a few step to the right gave better POV

TFS, Alireza

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1251 W: 0 N: 2447] (20126)
  • [2009-10-25 3:36]

Hello,

Fantastiqeu macro, comme elles est positionnée sur la fleur l'abeille, c'est génial, superbe image et macro.

Bravoe t maitié

Nicou

I'm trying to bite my tongue with this one.....

To say that it's downright awful would be an understatement.. I'm sorry to tell you Burak that none of the other critiques is telling you the simple plain truth that this is terribly out of focus!!!

So - check your FOCUS
Check your POV - head on and we can hardly see the bee or butterfly
Check exposure - over exposed on the flower and wings of butterfly
Boring composition in the centre of the frame. Learn the rule of 1/3rds.

I hope these very simple points will help you to take a better photo rather than a poor snapshot..

David

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  • vanda Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 229 W: 0 N: 227] (1634)
  • [2009-10-27 16:00]

Merhaba Burak!
Excellent shot of beautiful moment (butterfly and bee together).
Very good sharpness and lighting. Well done.
Ciao! Vanda

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