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SILHOUETTE


SILHOUETTE
Photo Information
Copyright: Burak Oktenli (burak28) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 399 W: 91 N: 506] (5922)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-06-25
Categories: Mood
Camera: Sony Cybershot DSC-S730
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Burak28 [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-10-08 0:26
Viewed: 163
Points: 52
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
THE SILHOUETTE

I wake and wipe the sleep from my eyes
Through blurred vision I see your silhouette
Standing in the open balcony doorway
Soft tufts of hair bouncing in the breeze
Morning sunlight glimmers
Off the bulge of your chest
casting even larger shadows
on the bedroom floor.
I stretch and rise, and sitting tall in my bed
Feeling the gentle morning breeze caress my face
While songbirds sing their morning serenade
Your scent fills my senses
Oh how it lights my soul with desire
How I long for you to hold me
How I need to feel your touch
How I need to hear your voice calling out my name
While gentle arms hold me close to your beating heart
I step from my bed
And turn to face the world
Anticipating the delight
Of yet another glimpse of your form
But the door stands vacant
Curtains blowing soft and free in the breeze
How empty is my heart, how lonely is my soul
For these shadows, these illusions of you
Now swept away without a sound
Are those I hold only in memory
Gathered long before you and I did part
Lost forever except deep within my heart.

Debra Hoffmann Brown

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Critiques [Translate]

Merhaba my friend...
Beautiful composition and colors...
Nice work...
Regards...
Andro

Hello Burak! Musterious work. Very interesting light and shadow. Sophisticated work. Good capture. Good luck!

Merhaba Burak,
Mükemmel bir günbatımı ve silüet çalışması.Tebrikler,
Selamalar,

hAyAti

Selam Burak,
Siuetli bir kompozisyon olunca yanına bir de şiir güzel uydu. Nefis olmuş. eline sağlık.
Bayram

Hi Burak,
Fantastic sunset somposition, nice presentation of silhouette. Awsome colours, nice photo! TFS.
Greetings,
Kristof

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  • zms Gold Star Critiquer [C: 321 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2008-10-08 1:05]

Dear Burak,
Stunning capture my friend.
Beautiful colours.
Thank You
Have a wonderful day
Rosa

Hi dear Burak
Excellent silhouette. Wonderful colors of sunset. Bravo
Best wishes my friend
Melany

Bom dia Burak!

WOW, great silhouette!
Very beautiful colors and view!
Congratulations my friend.
Tfs

regards.
Marco

Hello Burak!
Original SILHOUETTE and Sunset!
Very like moment and compo!
Grat!
Best regards
jazmin

Hi Burak,
Yes I agree that the silhouette is most defined and attractive in this sunset composition. Gorgeous colors and very relaxing to view. Best regards, Danilo

Selam Burak,
İşte bu harika
Netlik, kompozisyon ve renkler tam kıvamında...
Tebrikler ve gözlerinden öperim
Selahattin E

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  • milas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2167 W: 385 N: 2285] (24722)
  • [2008-10-08 6:45]

merhaba Burak...
işte olay bu...
eleştirilerime alınmıyordursun umarım, buna diyecek yok yani...o çalının orda ne işi var diyemem çünkü bunun orda olması gerekiyormuş, kareye derinlik ve zenginlik katmış, güzel bir çalışma...selamlar

Merhaba Burak
Silüetler ve günbatımı çok güzel,
renk detayları ile harika bir komposizyon.
Ellerine saglık.
Selamlar
H.Ayhan

Bonjour Burak,
Les couchers de soleil permettent de magnifier un simple paysage de mettre en valeur des silhouettes, humaines ou végétales!!!
Ta photo en est la preuve, Bravo!!!
Amitiés
Odile

Merhaba Burak, superb sunset with fantastic colors, wonderful silhouettes, very well done, ciao Silvio

Ciao...magnifica questa immagine
mi piace moltissimo
complimenti!

Alexia

Merhaba Burak,
Çarpıcı güzellikte bir silüet çalışması..
Eline sağlık. Sevgiler,selamlar.
Dr.Seyfettin Güner

Merhaba My Friend
Wonderful light in this sunset,great atmosphere
and perfect details
A very beautiful job
Best regards
Vincenzo

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 414 W: 0 N: 514] (5436)
  • [2008-10-08 12:19]

Hello,

Un mangigique coucher de solei. quelles belles couleurs, et surtout tu as très bien agrémenter ton image par la silhouette et la végétations, superbe.

Bravo et amitié

Nicou

Hi Burak,
Nice sunset with beautiful warm colors,
lovely silhouette well presented and composed,
Nice work Burak,
Très jolie photo..I like it
Michel

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  • Koala Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 389 W: 19 N: 74] (2710)
  • [2008-10-08 23:06]

Hi Burak!
Very good shot!
Colors and shadows are great,the contrast created is beautiful.

See you!

Alexandra

Hello Burk O
Excelent silhuet capture and amazing colours and tones. Superb light and detail. Great atmosphere and compo. Congrats, mb

Merhaba Burak,

Beautiful composition, wonderful colors!
Uma imagem deveras muito linda na qual você demonstra ser, além de um excelente fotógrafo, bem versátil.
Congratulations and TFS.
Selamlar
Sergio

Salam Burak
This is so nice, good idea, you are very creative Burak, very well done & TFS.
Cheers
Atri

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  • berek Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 730 W: 61 N: 33] (229)
  • [2008-10-11 1:11]

bence bu tür kompozisyonlarda çalış gayet başarılı bir ışık ve dengeli kadraj.
eline sağlık.
selam

Nicely composed Burak. Good colour and the silhouettes nice and clear. Good work with the sun too not too bright,
David

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