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a swan in the sea ...


a swan in the sea ...
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Copyright: alper oztutar (twin) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 444 W: 135 N: 200] (7300)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-07-18
Categories: Artwork
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): wow ! [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-08-02 10:34
Viewed: 837
Favorites: 6 [view]
Points: 72
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  • Ramdan Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 710 W: 31 N: 1453] (5654)
  • [2008-08-02 10:38]

Hi Alper,
:) fine details and love the smoothness of the skin. I love the vibrant color and 'vibrant' pose.
Regards,
Ramdan.

Nice Swan !! In holland we do have white swans, with feathers, but this bird is nice too. ;-)
Good (sun)colors and good sharpness.
greetings,
Joop!

Merhaba Alper,
Nefis bir poz,ten ve denizin harika kontrastı ile yansımalar..
Çok güzel model.Ellerine saglık arkadaşım.
Selamlar
H.Ayhan

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  • Adri Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 327 W: 14 N: 1127] (6539)
  • [2008-08-02 11:00]

Hi Alper,
A very strange swan....... but a lovely one!
Beautiful warm colours and a very nice reflection too!
Greetings from Netherland,
Adri

Hi Alper,
Great picture and great colours!
Regards
Gunnar

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  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 565 W: 18 N: 292] (2076)
  • [2008-08-02 11:20]

A great bird watcher you are. This bird does beat all your other birds hollow.
Seriously, a good photograph of a lovely lady. Good pose. The colour is a bit too warm for me, but the overall beauty of the image says it all.

Merhaba
Renkler çok canlı. harika..

Kerem

Hi Alper,
You have captured this very beautiful lady so well, the colours are so lovely and rich, and love the reflection in the water.
Totally beautiful shot.
TFS
Jane

Fine shot, almost erotic, but delicate. her glance made it.
TFS

marco

Merhaba Alper

harika bir çalışma. Renkler ve netlik güzel olmuş. Modelinizde çok başarılı poz vermiş.

Selamlar

Faruk

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  • bigil Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 232 W: 8 N: 53] (1616)
  • [2008-08-02 12:48]

He alper, ou est l'oiseau? Magnifique. Gilles

Hi Alper,

Great glow on the skin, well posed and shot.

Cheers
Tom

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  • Reflex Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 245 W: 68 N: 33] (1478)
  • [2008-08-02 13:07]

Soft colours, nice pose and nice light ! My greetings to your model, don't forget ! Well done !
Jean

Nice work, good job on the skin-smoothing and colour temp. This is formula glamour photography and it's a genre you do well.
Rew

hello Alper
The most wonderfull light I ever seen on TL

Congrats!

Hi Alper,

Skin tone is natural . . no touch up . . it's style I like . .
This is another expertise you have . . beside bird . .
Well composed. .

Tfs,
Tjutjut

Magnifique portrait.
Sensuel, mais de bon goût.
J'aime beaucoup l'idée
de perspective et
réflexion dans l'eau.

Bravo
France

Hi Alper
Well well many great swimmer could drown down by this "swan"
Beautiful ..hmmm
Cheers,Braca

I do agree completely with former comments made by Brianna.
Do I see a 'new' phase for TL here ? I thought 'nude'photography was 'forbidden' here on tl. Must be a change of policy . I like it.

Jan

you have a great collection of birds...
and ladies too :)

great angle and great model
nice color and reflexion :)

Hi Alper
the shot is really good
for ligh and details
Swan is perfect in her pose
reflexion is wonderful
ciao
have a nice week end

later

Color ,relflection and model it all top of the bill.
Great Alper.
jan

One beautiful swan.
Good skin tones and pose.

TFS
Tom

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  • tafa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 152 W: 3 N: 121] (1347)
  • [2008-08-03 10:10]

HI
It is a swan ?
good swan!!
:),:)

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  • siera Silver Star Critiquer [C: 13 W: 0 N: 0] (96)
  • [2008-08-03 22:35]

Very good shot ;)
Very nice model ;)

Regards
Siera

Beautiful picture with nice warming skin tones and wavy reflections on the water.

This is beautiful portrait....
Very nice shot.
Fine colour....
Good Luck.
rgd,
yogesh

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  • Leica Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 40 W: 25 N: 9] (868)
  • [2008-08-04 10:30]

Lovely model. The centered composition is a little boring I find. The skin tone needs work. The arm shadow helps defines her hip.

Gorgeous model, as usual... :-)
Maybe a little bit too warm her skin tones, probably due to sunset sunlight?
An overall good photo, anyway.
TFS
Ciao, Antonella

Hello Alper
A invitation to refresh itself? ; -)
Thanks for this " sensual " image!
Regards
Francesco

Hello Alper, beautiful lady, her lines are graceful as a swan. Great sun on her skin & I like the reflections. Busy here but I keep watch on your photos whitch are all top notch! Take care :} Don

A great example of subtle sensuality.
Excellent golden colours and light.
TFS & kind regards,
Erik

beautiful bird, the light is fantastic, and so is the composition
regards
jo

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  • MLINES Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1192 W: 87 N: 956] (6812)
  • [2008-08-28 13:59]

Hi Alper, A classic and very tasteful portrait. This scene could have been from the time of ancient Rome or Greece. You have caught a Goddess washing. TFS. Murray.

Epa! Un desafio a la norma TL! Pero muy lindo!
Un saludo,

P.-

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2819 W: 267 N: 842] (8311)
  • [2008-10-17 10:43]

Excellent portrait.The colors and the light are so beautiful.Nice model with a very expressive pose.Very good composition with the reflection in the water.This is a very attractive picture.Congratulations!
Michel

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