Kidness

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• rychousmama (226)
• [2007-01-18 13:21]

Welcome to TL! Good composition and perspective with the kids lined up, angling away from the viewer towards the right of the photo. I love their smiles and facial expressions, so sincere and full of curiosity. Great background with the white sky, the drab earth, and the children playing in the background. You see hope and light in these children. Thanks for sharing this beautiful photo!
-Lara

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• weled (162)
• [2007-01-18 13:22]
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Oncelikle TL ye hosgeldiniz Ece hanim.
Gercekten hos bir kare olabilirmis tabii cocuklari sola sIkIstIrmasaymissiniz.Arka planda oynayan cocuklarda dikkati dagitiyor biraz.Birde en ondeki cocuk haricinde diger butun cocuklarin ilgisi sizden cok arkanizdaki birine yada bir seye yonelmis...
Deklansore basmadan once vizorden daha uzun bakmaniz ve isiginiz bol olmasi dilekleriyle...
Eminim ki bu fotograf sizin kapasitenizi cok altinda ve emek harcasaniz daha iyi isler cikarta bilirsiniz...
Umarim ilk fotografiniza yaptigim bu yorum sizi uzmemistir...
Saygilarimla

Serdar

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• Dialogue (0)
• [2007-01-18 16:36]

Nice photo. I like how they are all in a line like that along with the action going on in the background. Thanks so much for sharing and welcome to Trek Lens!

-Charlie