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Copyright: Elif Eren (eliferen) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 573 W: 84 N: 426] (3644)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-03-18
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon 350D (Digital Rebel XT), 18-55mm 3.5-5.6 CANON
Exposure: f/16, 1 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-03-18 12:29
Viewed: 568
Points: 42
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Its rainy again..
Im busy in weekdays again..
And i found something interesting for to take... again :)
This is normally put on long side of it in vertical position, for puting the wine bottles into between curves. Sure it has a short name :)

* Lateral light comes from left.
* I put it on the dark colored table and used the black cardboard for the background.
* Taken with tripod (mini tripod on ironing table ;))
* I make the f stop 16 to get better sharpness.
And i choose the 200 iso, not enough light coming from window.
* Converted into B&W
* Cropped

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Hi Elif, beautiful composition. Nice lines. Well done.

Very nice almost symetrical composition (you have a tiny bit more on the right). Interesting play with shadows & light and I like the diminishing light from front to back. A good of spending a rainy day...Well done!

great symmetry and graphism Elif!
Maybe a bit more crop on the top?
Anyway great b&w shot!
Fred

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  • jbahia Silver Star Critiquer [C: 25 W: 0 N: 0] (121)
  • [2006-03-18 13:13]
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Hi Elif!
This is a beautiful grafisme, good work.
Regards.
Jaime Bahia

Hi Elif,
this is beautiful, I love the forms and the good contrast, a wonderful play of light and shadows, very well seen and captured, thanks
Sabine - wishnugaruda

Elif, you are a treasure:)
your graphic images are just wonderful!!
i love the S:)*-)
Sabina

Excellent composition Elif!
I love the black background it really works with the forms!

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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1119 W: 62 N: 168] (28209)
  • [2006-03-18 13:56]
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Nice subject, nice lightning, nice composirion, well very interesting one. Great. Elif.

excellent compo Elif :)
love the patterns, very nice symetry here

good b/w to keep the focus of attention on the curves and patterns

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2740 W: 372 N: 2627] (11958)
  • [2006-03-18 16:11]
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;o) You're a fast learner ;o)).
I guess it's called a wine-rack, Elif. Excellent patterns you've captured here, and I think the choice for b&w is an asset for the picture as colour could be more distracting. That's why I think you should have cloned out the bright spot in the crossbar in the upper left corner.
I love the light setup you made, as it prevents full symmetry which can be quite boring sometimes. Here, the light prevents that.
TFS.

Nice study on forms, Elif. The symetry is excellent, and the light very well balanced and serving to show the forms. Not an easy one to do, and you mastered it!

simetri, ışık kullanımı, komposizyon ve sunum harika!
Bir kez daha tebrikler sevgili Avcı :)
Selamlar
Hakan

Merhaba Elif, çok yaratıcı bir çalışma, tonlar dengeli ve simetri harika.. tfs
Alaettin

Hi Elif,

Nice. Very nice... Excellent.
I like this shot like it is, I make a workshop, only beacuse it's rainy again, and i wanted to play with good elements. Thanks,

ferran

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Your angle is prrfect to give attract very much!

Very interesting capture. You did well to see this and to think of it. And black and white is just the right choice here....creates a better impact. Well done.

Very good use of curves. The lighting is very pleasant.

S-s-s-superb! I like how you're playing with shapes on your photos! Well done, again! :)
cheers
ToM

excellent patterns

wow composition

jaco

It goes to show if one used steps and tripod, what results you get...of course your idea makes it

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  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 757 W: 37 N: 423] (3843)
  • [2006-04-10 1:36]
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NiSe GraphisSSSsssm sSSSShot asSSS alwaysssssSSSSsss Elif!

* Although i realise the sharpness of Rare & background abit blur or else to make a better DOF on it in f22 / 2 Sec or f32 / 4 Sec, & set timer to get the same result? How do your think?

Wong

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