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the only thing that i can't forget


the only thing that i can't forget
Photo Information
Copyright: Elif Eren (eliferen) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 573 W: 84 N: 426] (3644)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-05-06
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon 350D (Digital Rebel XT), 18-55mm 3.5-5.6 CANON
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/50 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Eye's [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-05-09 16:30
Viewed: 1175
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 38
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Words can be deceptive but eyes can never. Perhaps this is the reason we can never forget them.

* Cropped
* USM
* Coverted to B&W
* Played with selective colors and increased the contrast
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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To eMBeer: Hi Marekeliferen 1 09-03 23:58
To surfacing: Hi Marekeliferen 3 05-19 02:24
To gbinzat: Merhaba Gokhaneliferen 3 05-18 02:54
To jjholle: :)eliferen 1 05-11 02:17
To Ilir: Hi Albaneliferen 1 05-11 02:15
To delnaja: Merci Fredeliferen 1 05-11 02:14
To yer6: Merhaba Hakaneliferen 1 05-10 02:48
To Dawn: Hi Dawneliferen 1 05-10 02:38
To magda_indigo: Hi Magdaeliferen 1 05-10 02:13
To Tintin: Hi Suzanneeliferen 1 05-10 02:11
To romior: Hi Rosaeliferen 1 05-10 02:09
To JohnTulip: Hi Johneliferen 1 05-10 01:58
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Critiques [Translate]

**When the eyes are listening we can speak to the heart**

Merhaba Elif, as eyes don't lie, they can't be forgotten.. mysteries look, great implementation of b&w..
well done

Alaettin

intrigant glance, very good crop. the glance are increase with the white bordes, really a spectacular work

Very nicely done, Elif. Good treatment on the image with the conversion to B&W and the high key notes on the left; actually it is interesting to see the high key turning into a more traditional b&w as we move from left to right. Good crop to show only the eyes with a bit more on the right to unbalance the centered composition. Well done!

a very penetrating look, like the expressivity, thanx, M, (*_*)

sorry...out of points...again...

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  • Dawn Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1139 W: 100 N: 3357] (17508)
  • [2006-05-09 19:10]
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Beautiful eyes...

and Beautiful words John Tulip...

Nice compostion Elif.. is this you ?

Well done.
Regards
Dawn.

Hi Elif,

Good capture, these ayes are well captured with her expression, nice. Frame works well in this image.

regards,

ferran

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  • yer6 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 233 W: 40 N: 118] (1366)
  • [2006-05-09 23:50]
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in fact, professionals of body language are saying that evrything can be deceptive but hands can never.. :)

everybody wants to belive in lies.. and everybody always remember the promises.. maybe this is the real reason we can never forget the eyes..

but photographic work is perfect elif..

One more time, a nice and feminine realization !
(beautiful eyes ^^)

nice one Elif. I like the contrasted b&w and the high key notes. Interesting experiment ; ))

beautiful!
Who would forget such marvellous eyes;)
I love the smile I can see in them.
Wonderfully framed, bravo elif!
Marija:))

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3549 W: 736 N: 2384] (18964)
  • [2006-05-10 4:25]

Wonderful expression captured and very well presented, Elif !!!


thanks and have a great day,
v

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  • Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 549 W: 69 N: 53] (5119)
  • [2006-05-10 6:13]
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Eyes bursting with optimism. and make-up, heheh. Very nice presentation, like the framing. Good work.

A.

wow ... what an expressive look :o)
TFS it Elif
ili :o)

Merhaba Elif,

You are so right about your note Elif, I'll never forget your eyes after this photo ;)
Very good photo and PP work...my compliments.

J..

Gorgeous photo Elif. Is it your eyes that makes this photo superb or your technique? I think both.
As far as I know, pupils give hints about our feelings. They speak louder than words. Brava Elif!
Thank you for sharing.
Best regards.
Gokhan BINZAT

Hello Elif, this is a very good close-up of the most important part of the face. The eyes.

You show us with great art and modernism a portrait.

I love the horizontal format you chose, the b/w tone and the white border which doesn't constrain the face in a enclosed canvas.

Take care Yan!
And thank you very much for you kind words in my day post :)

Hi Elif,
I'm not rating this photo - WONDERFUL idea of showing so strong expression of the eyes (I agree with your note) for me is dissolved in the white framing... :-((( I wish both frames were black... pushing me back to the eyes - for now they're lost and unimportant within excessive white area... And... in this case it should be absolutely central composition. (I'm sorry, but I feel it like I described...) tfs

Marek

Nice eyes! Good PP to create a neat effect.

TFS,
Pedro

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  • LuciG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1286 W: 153 N: 729] (8681)
  • [2006-06-11 11:19]

Hi ELIF!
Beautiful composition that is followed by wonderful words!
Congratulations.
Luci

Hi Elif,

this time I will rate this photo for I know how it looks like with black frames and with thin white lines as it was in the workshop... *s* Rest of my opinion didn't change...

rgds

Marek

P.S. Pity you're not here anymore with only really few critiques from time to time... YOur works are so interesting... *s*

M.

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