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Copyright: Elif Eren (eliferen) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 573 W: 84 N: 426] (3644)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-05-06
Categories: Daily Life, Experimental
Camera: Canon 350D (Digital Rebel XT), 18-55mm 3.5-5.6 CANON
Exposure: f/14.0, 1/160 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-05-11 12:50
Viewed: 1093
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 58
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
These are the handle parts of the spoons. I played with them in the sun on the white paper :) Tried to give good shape with the shadows. And let some of them reflect the red color of my shirt. Actually i put another white paper to prevent the reflection, but the result was too cold in that way.
Wish to know what you think!

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To anneliesje: Annelies!!!!!eliferen 1 05-26 02:34
To wck: Hi Wongeliferen 1 05-26 02:20
To JohnTulip: Merhaba Johneliferen 1 05-12 16:59
To kitflorendo: Hi Kiteliferen 1 05-12 16:57
To Werewolf: Hi Werewolfeliferen 1 05-12 16:38
To Highjah: Bonjour Fredeliferen 1 05-12 16:22
To Tintin: Hi Suzanneeliferen 1 05-12 16:16
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To romior: Hi Rosaeliferen 1 05-12 16:10
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To Shimshams: Hi Robeliferen 1 05-12 16:06
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  • iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1119 W: 62 N: 167] (27895)
  • [2006-05-11 12:52]

Excellente réalisation technique. Bravo !

beautiful light and sadows Elif! You really are the "Queen" of this kind of image. Bravo!

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5680 W: 197 N: 2412] (9527)
  • [2006-05-11 12:59]

Hi Elif,

Wow!!
Wonderful presentation,
I adored his creativity here.
she was wonderful
Very well!!!

Sérgio

Good idea, well thought out and presented.
Like the curving diagonal line.
best wishes
Rob :)

graphic Elif trademark!!!

Wonderful!

Sabina

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  • Ms-Mew Gold Star Critiquer [C: 548 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-05-11 13:50]
  • [2]

From far this look like a propellor of some sort, very nice POV..well done The red shirt adds the warmth needed for the cold steel of the spoons.

TFS

Marie-Lise

Awesome shot Elif
I love the look of this image its very artsy, excellent.
Thanks for sharing

This is FANTASTIC, Elif!
Geneous!
My compliments!

have a nice evening, Karina:)

Very nice composition and this photo shows your creative mind...I realy enjoy it to watch your work and this one is a good example.
Have a wonderful day and görüsmek üzere,

J..

Well, I like it a lot. You have been very creative and produced an original visual apealing shot.

TFS,

Pedro

  • Great 
  • yer6 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 233 W: 40 N: 118] (1366)
  • [2006-05-11 15:28]

soyut, duru, guzel. basit nesnelerden sanat objesi uretmissiniz. tebrikler.

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  • ciore Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 782 W: 3 N: 108] (2305)
  • [2006-05-11 16:50]

good work,Elif.
looks fun and excellent done
V.

Superb composition Elif! a magistral light, and the game of lines with shades is wonderful. A excellent still life with spoons, very original!!

Quite a realisation, Elif! The light is very good, harsh enough to give an abstract feel to the image. Love it!

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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1666 W: 136 N: 1263] (6138)
  • [2006-05-11 18:54]
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Hello Elif,
great grafics. Superp POV and excellent use of light.
Sky

Wow, this is an amazing experiment, Elif. You are very good with this type of picture as you have a good eye for arranging object in a pleasing & artistic way. Great decision to include the reflection of your shirt as I like the gradation of colours from beige to red. Well done!

Ha ! It's really your signature, I like when You do that kind of artwork.

In a technique point of view, it's better with the 350D than your Coolpix.

Very nice !

Excellent composition. Took a while staring at the pic and then read your note. like the lines

Well made! I immediately recognize the shape and say...Wonderfull idea! And it give something with a good design!

I just wish that I hadn't read the note. The reality was not as good as my imagined vision right from the T/nail stage. I had this down as the blades of a fan, of a turbine. Just shows how wrong I can be. Just shows how naive and gullible I am.
Truth out, it is still impressive. All the diagonals and angles, with great lighting and shadows too! Then a decisive hard crop. The slight red tint adds ome variety. All it needs to enhance it to the full is a suitable frame. On PC displays, it does help a lot.

Very creatively done. The red reflections from your shirt was a good idea to warm things up. Well done.

Merhaba Elif.
What I think ? Only nice and creative hands can make a grand/fantastic creation! Do you know anyone one who fit this discription ? ^_^ Special photo Elif!

John

points later

bu kadar duzgun araliklarla nasil dizdin hayret ettim. ilginc fikirler cikiyor senden.seni takip etmeye devam edecegim.isigin bol olsun

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  • drymd29 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1447 W: 248 N: 654] (7621)
  • [2006-05-12 17:59]

Artful and modern looks.
Like a ven; good work; I like the crop, a quarter of a imaginative big circle.
Huub

hi. love this pic. So abstract but what makes it such a nice shot is its simplicity.
Thanks for sharing.

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  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 757 W: 37 N: 423] (3843)
  • [2006-05-15 2:30]
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Hello my friend Elif, another great home studio photo from you. In my first impression, i thought it was vector graphic, but this is really amazing result, it's surreal in reality. very well done buddy!

Cheers!
Wong

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3552 W: 736 N: 2386] (18976)
  • [2006-05-15 7:26]

Very creative, Elif.
Looks very elegant ... very well done, THANKS !!!

have a great week,
v

Wonderful abstract, Elif. This shot reminds me of a flower, of the sun and of rowing. So let's shorten it to: this is a 'summer shot'!
Hope you are doing well. I am nervous all the way... Think of us on Friday 26th!! ;-)
I hope I'll find some good shots on our trip next week. You may see me here more often again! :-)
Kind regards,
Annelies

Hi Elif, superb! Love the curved diagonal axis, the colours, the strong shadows on the white bg.

I like also the gradiant colour on the utensils.

Very well done! Yan :)

Well seen Elif. A unique and creative composition. Bravo.

Joe

Hello Elif:

you have played in a wonderful way with these objets and the shadows to create with these patterms a lovely picture with great visual attraction

well donne , a lot of creativity

jjo

Simplistic Beauty, well thought out and photographed, excellent work Elif, I like your style

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