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half self


half self
Photo Information
Copyright: Elif Eren (eliferen) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 573 W: 84 N: 426] (3644)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-05-06
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon 350D (Digital Rebel XT), 18-55mm 3.5-5.6 CANON
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/60 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-05-12 18:24
Viewed: 1096
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 48
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another high key B&W experiment.
Increased contrast, and played with selective colors.
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To ruudblok: Hi Ruudeliferen 1 06-30 09:23
To Werewolf: Hi Alaineliferen 1 06-12 02:33
To jjholle: Hi Mr. J.!eliferen 1 05-26 02:29
To Dingo: Full self :)eliferen 1 05-26 02:27
To gbinzat: Merhaba Gokhaneliferen 1 05-14 11:25
To ozoz3000: Merhaba Ozgureliferen 1 05-14 11:00
To ciore: Hi Vik!eliferen 1 05-14 09:04
To mephistoo: Thanks!eliferen 1 05-14 08:49
To delnaja: Merci Fredeliferen 1 05-14 08:36
To Tintin: Hi Suzanneeliferen 1 05-14 07:57
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Another very good one, Elif. You have recover your inspiration! Very nice self-portrait and great high key treatment. I really like the pensive mood you have capture in this one with your hand on your head and your head all over your face. Excellent!

oh..
half selfes these days on Tl.;-)
it's beautiful Elif!!

and of course...closed eyes,after seeing them opened last time....
great!

Creative idea, I like the thought behind it, we are always thinking more than one thing any given time (almost), good reflection of the idea.. b&w worked very effectivly..
tebrikler

Alaettin

Well done! I like it very much!
Great job with the contrast and the B&W!
Nice compo!

Roberto Juarez!

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  • dada Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 909 W: 46 N: 382] (6560)
  • [2006-05-13 1:40]

mmm beautiful! like a beloved song;)

tfs
anca

the experiment is perfect here ; ))) I think you reached your goal.
I like the pose that makes a curve... A good b&w close up.
In my favs... thanks : )

hi elif. i like halfportraits.looks so special and intresting. great shot thanks mephistoo

Hi Elif,

this half is well cropped, a nice experiment, I like a lot.
this self have a nice expression and I like the pose.
Excellent!

regards,

ferran

Great portrait Elif.
Thanks fpr sharing.
Brava.

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  • ciore Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 782 W: 3 N: 108] (2305)
  • [2006-05-13 14:30]
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nice work,Elif
very good cropp and contrast.
Vik

Now this is my kind of photography....Love the crop and the half image presentation. And black and white adds to the impact,

Cok basarili, Elif. Yaraticiligina hayranim. Kotu bir fotografini gormedim burda...

Such a successful photo. Unusual but effective cropping.

Ozgur

Merhaba Elif,
Again, a superb and impressive B&W self portrait. I like it very much!
Thank you for sharing.
Is it by purpose, right face?
I read or heard that left face is more emotional than right though. And your eyes shot...
Best regards.

Gokhan BINZAT

Hi Elif,
this photo is a good manifestation of your ability of pulling out of what you see, the most important things. After I saw this photo I realised that it's obvious that to present someone you do not have to show his/her whole face. Or the whole body. Or whatever - provided that the object is symmetrical. And we humans are almost symmetrical.
It's so obvious, but I realised it only now, after looking at this photo. I think that being half it has even bigger impact. For we react stronger to assymetrical pictures... Thus I love this shot! tfs

Marek

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2744 W: 369 N: 2624] (11948)
  • [2006-05-15 17:23]
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Why not a full self, Elif ? ;o)).
I think this high contrast really suits you, but I feel the frame is too high and too narrow to be really "pleasing" to look at. That, and the arm, make your head look high & narrow. A strange picture - but I'll come back later to look again. Some pictures must "grow on you", I think this might be one of them.
TFS

A real beauty this portrait and you Elif...I began right now to blush ;) nevermind the way how it is composed is very good...my compliments for you.

Görüsmek üzere,

J..

Çok güzel kompozisyon. Siyah beyaz olmasıda başarılı.

Kerem

Very very good portrait. Original, artistic.
More "dark" than usually, indeed ! interresting...

Very intriging like to see it all. lol
Jan

I like the presentation of that half face! It's original and the result is expressive! With the hand in the hair it's create in my eyes a contemplative mood... Lost in the minds...
Great one!

Hi Elif,
A deep breath
And then the emotion.
This is so strong and good I can’t explain
Very Very good
Ruud

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  • guliz (2)
  • [2006-07-05 4:28]

elifcigim,
cok guzel kompozisyon ve S&B cok yakismis...
isigi cok iyi oynatmissin....
gercekten yaratciligin cok iyi.... hic ihmal etme, devam et..
tebrikler....

Hello Elif,
Very beautiful image processing.
The selected format and the selected centring are perfect.
Stéphane

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  • dbp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 680 W: 9 N: 97] (4065)
  • [2007-04-29 11:58]

very Creative Elif
excellent work
beautiful
David

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