metal spine

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• suzley (6786)
• [2006-05-14 11:23]
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Hi.

The thumbnail looked like a grill on the front of a car.

nice work here, i like it...love the shadows.

Stv.

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• tropicalrips (0)
• [2006-05-14 11:28]

clever use of shapes and material here Elif
excellent work

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• Tintin (1982)
• [2006-05-14 11:29]
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Another good one in this series, Elif. Personally, I might have cropped the one knife at the bottom as it does not have the nice colour reflection and it seems a bit out of place. For the rest, I quite like your composition and the colours gradation from beige to red; actually the red seems to be more present this time, maybe you were closer. Well done!

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• kateb (2991)
• [2006-05-14 12:10]

A clever idea, and very well executed. Nice product!

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• chiping59 (3448)
• [2006-05-14 12:29]

Good use of shadows and light!I like the reflections of different colours on the spoon.It is very interesting!
Well done!
Regards,
chiping

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• Highjah (1053)
• [2006-05-14 13:29]
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1/320 seconds ? This is the time I've needed to recognize your work ! :o)

Nice textures in this one, especially the reflections of the spoons in the knives. It could be a 3D picture !

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• Ghauri (439)
• [2006-05-14 13:44]

Hi Elif

This is wonderful, perfect composition and colors, well done.

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• Mrlittle (5537)
• [2006-05-14 13:52]

Hello Elif.
What a beautiful prerecording and very creative. I love work this type and show a large class.
Frans

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• Photograph2u (0)
• [2006-05-14 13:52]

Hi Elif, I like very much your idea of a metal spine with these spoons. This is a great idea and well realised with the shine on the metal and the gradiant colour.

Very well displayed with this round shape leading our eyes to the top of the pic.

Take care. Yan :)

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• tournesol (12862)
• [2006-05-14 17:28]
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Another good one, Elif! You certainly have a knack for setting up objects; your creative work starts before you get the camera! For this one, I would see a square format. Good control of the light and nice reflections on the cutlery. Good work!

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• ferran (0)
• [2006-05-14 19:55]

Hi Elif,

Great, great work! I like this pattern and the play with the shadows. Artistic and original. It´s a pleasure for my eyes.

regards,

ferran

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• lucbus (10261)
• [2006-05-15 7:25]

Hi Elif,
I like this great composition with all the lines and the curved diagonal of the middle line. The lighting with the shades is really excellent. very well done.
Luc

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• Henri (276)
• [2006-05-15 10:01]
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Elif,

Very eyecatching thumbnail!
The large size picture is very surprising (even more when I read the note). I like the originality of this composition. very pleasant colours and geometrical effect + with the shadows combination.
TFS
Henri

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• drymd29 (7621)
• [2006-05-15 16:15]

Hi Elif; good again; tight presented; attractive.
But I would like to have the escorting unto the left cormer or cropped the lowest one. You probably did not want any space left around.
The image is a ven again; in a froze posture.
Huub

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• TasmaniaC (5432)
• [2006-05-17 22:49]

I must say, so creative, proving that "Simple things in life are often the best".. great result

Alaettin

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• Werewolf (26142)
• [2006-06-07 16:09]

Excellent idea! It's original and permissive in many way i'm shure! The result is modern and dynamic!

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• harpya (9527)
• [2006-06-11 11:21]

Hi Elif,


I liked the formation, a composition
different and enigmatic, of beautiful tones
giving an imagination of ideas.
Congratulations, for his creativity!

Sérgio

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• Dingo (11948)
• [2006-06-12 9:10]
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Nice arrangement with objects that are well suited for studiowork, Elif. I think I'd have cropped this closer from the top and from the right, to let the knives 'start' in the top right corner too.
Anyway, it looks nice as is! Excellent set-up for the light.
TFS