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Copyright: Figen Kokol (fkokol) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 245 W: 0 N: 148] (1452)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-06-02
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/80 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-06-03 16:33
Viewed: 375
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 10
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To rewshearer: thanksfkokol 1 06-04 16:06
To hamurkaroglu: teşekkürlerfkokol 1 06-04 16:04
To denizler: teşekkürlerfkokol 1 06-04 16:03
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I like this. A difficult shot to set up, the focus will want to lock on the tree rather than your model - but you've done a good job. It's engaging, interesting and nicely composed. TFS!

Merhaba Figen,
Çok güzel kompozisyon . Başarılı bir çalışma. Kutluyorum.
Mehmet Hamurkaroglu

Selamlar Figen Hanim,
Cok carpici bir kare.Tebrikler!!
Deniz.

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  • gnada Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2088 W: 59 N: 2665] (14693)
  • [2007-02-26 1:50]

Hi Kokol... This is a very nice B&W photo. I like the contrasts, and tones are excellent. George

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  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 565 W: 18 N: 292] (2076)
  • [2007-06-13 10:38]

I like this one.
She seems very beautiful ... if her eyes are anything to go by. The composition is also quite novel - the roughness of the bark of the tree trunk contrasting with the softness of her skin and the gentleness of her eyes.
Yet, I am not sure why, there seems to a fuzziness to the photo that takes something away. Maybe a bit more contrast ...

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